Your Neela Maa


Neela & Ashish were in their room
Neela: Ashish mera beta kahan hai usse dhond na hoga
Ashish: Neela hume Avni ki dikhbal(care) karna chahiye woh kitni dukhi hogayi Neil ke jaane se
His thought: Neela never accepted Avni as her bahu and got angry at Neil same like my mom madhuri did to Neela. I need to end this cycle now that Neil is gone. Once Neela treats Avni like her own daughter that's when I will look for Neil. Until, then Neela enjoy me refusing you for the first time
Ashish: Nahi Neela
Neela: Neil ashish ji
Ashish: uski zindagi hai mujhe kya
Neela kept insisting Ashish to find Neil and him shaking his head mouthing no
Suspiciously they were unaware on the scene outside their home a mother and friend like daughter duo Madhuri-Ayesha were watching them thru their binoculars (Ayuri or Masha?🤔)
{imagine small Avni's mom in the show for Ayesha and Avni's paternal grandmother in the show for Madhuri}

Ayesha: mujhe toh yakeen nahi araha mads ki Ashish ne uss Neela ke saath shaadi kiya hai
Madhuri(mads): unka naam maat le mujhe uss ladki se nafrat hai mein sirf aapko apni bahu maanti ho ayeshi aaja meri baahon mein
Madhuri turns to give her ayeshi a big hug
She tightens her grip on Ayesha
While Ayesha is grasping for air she coughs out the words to make mads let go
: mads chod mujhe saas nahi aarahi
Madhuri: ayeshi mein tumko nahi chod dungi jab tak tum mujhe nahi apni baahon mein leti
Ayesha gives up trying to fight her mads on the hug
Ayesha smiles and reciprocates her mads hug : yeh le mads
Madhuri lets go her tight grip on Ayesha
Madhuri's thoughts: Oh Ayesha Ayesha Ayesha your hatred for Neela will get the both of us what we want you maaried to Ashish once Ashish is under your control I will be ruler of the family just wait and watch my dearest ayeshi
Madhuri smirks at that thought before Ayesha looks up at her
Madhuri: ayeshi tujhe kya hua?
Ayesha: mujhe kuch nahi hua mads sirf uski yaad aarahi thi  {emphasis on uski}
Madhuri: oh ayeshi tum usse pyar mein pagal toh nahi ho jaarahi na?
Ayesha's face expression changed to in shock
Ayesha thought: mads ne yeh sawaal kyun kiya🤔??? Mein aur pagal🤔??? khabhi bhi nahi Ashish mera pyar hai aur humesha rahega!!!
Meanwhile back the house in Neil's room presently occupied by his wife
Avni talking to Neil's picture frame
: Neil tum kahan ho?? Your precious neela maa nafrat kardi hai mujhse uske saamne toh mein saans(air) bhi nahi leti
Tumne kaha tha ki tumhari neela maa kitni pyaari hai kahan hai woh pyar Mr.Neil?? mujhe chodke kahan ho  *her eyes get watery tears fall down to his picture
Elsewhere
A woman is shown dancing near a man in the outgoing club
Man: I love being here with you Jas you are my life and soul
Jas: oh really guy how can I be your life and soul when I don't fully know you? I do get paid to be around you
The Man looks up at her clearly infuriated with her statement pushes her off him and calls out for the manager 
The manager steps out of office towards his dancer jas
The manager: Jas what happen did you do something? Why did I get called?
The man: hey you are the manager right talk to me your paying customer not her
The manager: no you listen she works for me I treat each of my employees with utmost respect they deserve
The man mocks the manager utmost respect what respect do these people deserve?! They are only dancers  *he turns to Jas and shouts at her:  such a humiliating job isn't it Jas? How   do you face your family doing this job? Not just me Jas even society thinks of you as dirty
Jas's voiceover
I knew what the man said was right I don't deserve to be treated perfectly by anyone after all I am trash
I get told this on a daily basis by my family , their relatives, and random strangers
The only person in my life who doesn't view me as trash is Arjun my manager here
I want to tell this man he is wrong then he could leave but I seen a hand signal from Arjun not to respond
The man: Jas why aren't you answering my question?
Arjun grits his teeth : talk to me not her
The man raise his eyebrow : fine mr.?
Arjun: Mr.Arjun Rana and you are
The man: Neil Kapil
Arjun: what seems to be the problem Neil?
{Neil is played by Zain Inam same as in show}
Neil:  Jas *pointing his finger at her👉 * claimed that she's not my life and soul because she gets paid to be with me
why did she say that Mr.Arjun?
Arjun rolls his eyes when Neil said this
Arjun: oh Neil Neil Neil that was why I got called out here and all this got started !?*referring to their conversation*
Neil: yes
Arjun: listen Neil Kapil Jas is a dancer not your lover that she will agree with you
You shouldn't be saying those meaningful love  statements to her and it is true she does get paid to be around the customers but that necessarily doesn't mean she gets paid to answer them *looking at Jas right next to him*
I would request you Neil Kapil to leave from my club before I call the cops and have you arrested for pushing and threatening Jas
Neil: there is no way I will get arrested for simply pushing Jas and by the way I didn't threaten her
Arjun: just wait and watch Neil I am calling the cops to get you arrested * pulls out the phone from his pocket dials the number* and you did threaten her. Her lifestyle is none of your business.
Police officer Vik Rana: Arjun what is it? I gave you this number only if there's an life or death emergency!
Arjun rolls his eyes at this : Vik this is an life and death emergency
Vik rolls his eyes : sure you do Arjun!
Arjun: I really do its regarding Jas
Vik raised his eyes : are you serious Arjun Jas nu kya hogaya meri pyaari bhabhi nu
Arjun: Vik I am serious Jas was pushed by a customer and made threats against her
Vik: Arjun tumne pehle kyun nahi bola ki ek badtemeez ladka ne meri bhabhi nu maara
Arjun: hoye Vik Jas tumhari bhabhi kabse bani?
Vik: humesha se bro! You don't realize how protective you get of Jas do you? Ever since Jas has been working at your club you care more for her than any other employee
Unknowingly Arjun blushes remembering past memories of him and Jas
Arjun: oh I do Vik I just realized and we will continue this later at home. Now come to the club to arrest the customer Neil Kapil.
Skipping until Vik is in the club
Vik: Neil Kapil you are under arrest for pushing and making threats to Mrs.Jas Rana
Neil looks at the Rana twins in shock : she is his wife Mrs.Jas Rana then why she's a dancer in his club?
Arjun: Vik take him away I don't want to waste more of my time explaining to this pathetic man
Vik Rana takes Neil Kapil out of the club in handcuffs he turns to Neil
Vik: Jas meri bhabhi hai mere brother ki dulhan
[End]
There's no long author's note 💁🏼 Does anyone like them? Who do you see playing the Rana siblings Arjun and Vik along with Jas? Do tell in comments...  Storywise Neil is in the story now along with all the new entries Ashish, Madhuri(mads), Ayesha(ayeshi), Arjun , Jas , & police officer Vik Rana    *when did dancing in a club become such a taboo Neil🙄?*
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