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Karan:chalo ab

He moves forward

Preeta:o hello ik minute(he stops and turns)chalo kya chalo hum abhi bhi chal k hi jaye ge

Karan:tou preeta madam k liye jet mangwao kya

Preeta:akal k paidal insan(he glare her)phone haina rishab ji ya sameer ko call k koi car mangwao double duffer donkey

Karan:hey stop aaj kuch zyada hi nhi boli ja rhi tum bat bat pe

Preeta:han tou tumhari harkatein dekhi hain phone pocket mein hain aur pore road pe chalaye ja rhe hoo

Karan:arey yar galti hogyi nikal gaya demagh se jan loo gi kya ab

Preeta:kash main aisa kr pati

Karan:kisi roka hai krdoo acha hai mar k tumhari batoon se bhi jan choote gi

Preeta:lekin tumhare marne k bad main kaise zinda rhogi

Karan(smirk):kyun itna pyar krti hoo mujhse

Preeta:han galti se dil k hathoo majboor hoo

Karan:acha dil k hathoo tou main bhi bhut majboor horha hoo abhi

He comes closer to her she  look at him and push him back

Preeta:door rho abhi apna ye romance apne paas rkho road pe khare hain hum

Karan:tou kya hua preeta koi hai thori idhar(he comes more close to her) sirf main(he pull her holding her waist) aur tum(pull her more close and said huskily)aaj tum meri ban jao

She was looking at him nervously but listening his lines she look down and moves two steps back from him and look at other side karan rubs his hair in nervousness preeta was the first to broke the ice

Preeta:woh car mangwa loon kise se

Karan just hummed and makes a call but was'nt able to

Karan:signal nhi arahe hain yahan par

Preeta:tou ab

Karan:ab chalo raaste mein dekhte hain shayad ajaye tab tak

She nods and its started raining

Karan:ye barish bhi abhi honi thi

He looked at preeta she was fully drenced in rain and looking so beautiful her wet body was making his hormone wild she was intensely looking at her while she was busy in herself

Preeta:yeh baarish o god karan jaldi chalo

She looked at him and felt nervous

Preeta(nervously):karan

He came to his senses

Karan:hn

Preeta:jaldi chalo yahan bhut barish horhi hai koi chat dhoondo

Karan:han chalo

They were walking while karan was taking glances from preeta

Preeta:ahhhh

Karan:kya hua

Preeta:mera paao kuch chuba

Karan bends down

Karan:dekhao(he look at her feet)patthar chub gaya dekh k chala kro na

He stands

Preeta:choro main chal loon gi

She takes one step and feel pain she suddenly felt a hand on her wet bare waist and karan picks her up

Preeta:karan

Karan:shh chot lagi hai dard hoga tumhe

He walk holding her in his arms she lovingly looked at her they walk for a while

Preeta:main chal loongi tumhare hath mein dard hojayega

Karan:main chal rha(his eyes went on a cottage)preeta wo dekho jhoopri

Preeta:han chalo ye baarish bhi rok hi nhi rhi

Karan:han chalo

Preeta:ik minute niche tou utaaro

Karan:zara sa tou hai main le ja rha hoona

He takes her in the cottage and lays her on the floor he looks here and there and takes wood and fire up them and and sits beside preeta he noticed that she wss shiviring because of cold he takes out his jacket and makes her wear

Karan:thand lag rhi hai tumhe yeh phn loon

She nods she was rubbing her hand infront of the fire blowing air on her hand and karan was just admiring her suddenly preeta hugged karan listening a sudden thunderstorm his heartbeat skip preeta closes her eyes in fear and clucth hus t shirt karan looked at her her hairs was infromt of his face by which he cant admire her face he lift his hand tucks her hairs back she opens her eyes and departed from him karan was intensly looking at her he moves his hand and hold her hand pressing it tightly preeta closed her eyes he moves to her her heart beat was soo fast he was coming closes to her the more he was coming to her more she taking heavy breath she fist her other hand tightly and press karan hand tightly in nervousness karan comes to her lips they were soo much their nose were touching each other nose karan closes his eyes and he traces her thumb on her hand which he was holding their lips were about to met but preeta stands from there and shyly stands near a window facing her back to him he look at her and stand he moves to her and back hugged her she closes her eyes and leaves herself on him he hold his both hand closing his eyes he rubs her cheek with her cheeks she felt shivers in her body

Karan(dugging his face in her said huskily):i want you