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Shristy is on call with preeta

Shristy:di kesi hoon ap aajkl bat hi nh krti susral ki hi bank reh gyi

Preeta:main blkl thk hoon aur zyada drama baazi band kr tu bhi a skti hai na mujhse milne
Shristy:acha ok ok aur bataye jiju kaise hain

Preeta:sahi hi hai tujhe pta hai aaj itna si bat par itna ghussa agaya usse

Shristy:kaisi bat

Preeta:wo kya hai na(tell her the whole matter)main aur wo tou hamesha aise hi baat krte hai maine pehle baar ghada tou nh bola usse

Shristy:dii main ap ka kya karoo wo kya bolte hai jiju apko hn chauthi fail wohi lag rhe hoon ap mujhe

Preeta:shristy!!

Shristy:kya preeta dii yar karan sir apko ik husband ki tarah bye bolna chahte the jese ik husband apni biwi ki jane se pehle krta hai bye so many hugges and kisses

Preeta:ughh!!shristy chup kr baqwas mat kiya kr

Shristy:ap mano ya na mano karan sir ap se pyar krte hai

Preeta:shristy chup blkl chup maina tujhse bad mein baat krti hoon jab tera demagh thk hojaye ga

Shristy:bye ik na ik din man hi jao ge

Preeta cuts the call

Preeta:shristy ki batein agar sach hogyi tou nh aisa kuch bhi nh hoga

In roo college

Roo:yar ragging krne ka dil chah rha hai kiski kare

A handsome boy with books in his hand was going

He was rohan the most handsome boy of the college all girls are dewaanis of him but he was very simple and parhako keera

Varun(roo friend):yar wo dekh wo kitabi keera rohan

Maya:nh roo wo bhale hi kitabi keera hai lekin bhut rude hai

Roo:phir tou aur maza ayega

Roo(shouts):rohan

Rohan turns

Roo:pleass idhar aao

Rohan came there

Rohan:kiya hai

Roo:wo tumhe na

Varun:ragging choro challenge dete hain please roo mere liye

Roo:ok done

Rohan:mujhe koi challenge nh krna

Rohan turns to go

Roo:q dar gye kya

Rohan:rohan mehra khabhi kisi se nh dara

Roo:then challenge

Varun:basket ball match jo jeeta ussko(sees roo amd smirks)ussko iss college ki sab se khoobsurat lrki ki kiss mile gi

Maya:kis ki

Varun:the one and only khoobsurat ruchika luthra

Roo smiles

Rohan(smirks):par tumne tou kaha tha khoobsurat

Roo(angrily):oo hello mr mere sath zyada fazool mazaq krne ki zarorat nh hai

Rohan:main fazool lagoon se mazaq nh krta jo mujhe lagta hai wahi bol rha hoo 

Varun:acha ok ok classes k bad kre ge match(to roo)baby ready for the kiss

Rohan rolled his eyes and went from there

Practice ground

Vicky a random friend of karan

Vicky:tu pagal hai karan kis bat pe bharak rha hai

Karan:what do you mean by that

Vicky:dekh tune hi mujhe bataya tha na k teri shaadi kaise hui hai tou tu q usse ye expect kr rha hai k wo tujhe ik biwi ki tarah bole(minmincs)suniye ji ghar jaldi ayega bye(burst into laughter)i am sorry mere bhai par tou fazool mein over react kr rha hai acha chal couch bula rhe hain mujhe

Karan:bat tou sahi keh rha hai mujhe usse sorry bolna chahiye

He makes a call to preeta

Preeta:ye kis ka phone(sees the phone)karan ab ye q phone kr rha hai(pick the phone)bolo

Karan:i am sorry

Preeta:dobara bolna sahi se suna nh

Karan:i said i am sorry

Preeta:karan ye tumhi ho na(sees her phone)number tou tumhara hi hai

Karan:itna hairan q horhi hoo sorry hi tou bola hai

Preeta:arey hairan hone ki hi tou bat hai the karan luthra ne sorry bola hai

Karan:acha acha bs

Preeta:par kis bat par

Karan:wo subah fazool mein bharak gya

Preeta:oo wo its ok

Karan:chalo phir bye

Preeta:suno jaldi ana

Karan unwantedly smile and cut the phone

Vicky came there

Vicky :kya hua ghar jaldi bula liya kya(giggles)

Karan:aisa kuch nh hai acha sun main ja rha hoon ghar

Vicky:kab tak chupaye ga biwi ka hi bulawa aya hai na

Karan:tu bht pite ga mujh se

In luthra's office

Rishab:ye kya hai sahil ye kaise presentation hai(shouts)kam nh ata tou krte q hoo han abhi abhi yahan se chale jao just get out

Mahesh enters and sign sahil to go from there

Mahesh:apna flustration doosro pe q nikalrha hai

Rishab:dad please akela chor de mujhe please

Mahesh left from there

In the cafe

Kritika:hi akshay ji

Aksay:kya time horha hai

Kritika:1 baj rha hai

Akshay:tou maine tumhe 10 minute mein pohachne ko kaha tha aur tum yahan andhe gahnte bad pochi hoon

Kritika(fearly):aksay ji ...ghar se yahan tak ka raasta bht door ka hai

Akshay hold her sholder tightly

Akshay:agar tum aise hi meri bat talti rhe tou anjam bht bura hoga

Kritka:ye ap ...ap kya keh rhe hai

Akshay suddenly cups her face

Akshay:u know na i love u dekho mujh se tumhari ignorance bardasht nh hoti chalo coffe pete hain

Kritika nods