R E S U L T S ! (Round One)
I N T R O D U C T I O N
Here are the results! Now before I start, I just wanted to say fantastic job to everyone who participated! Each of your one shots were so cute and original, and I enjoyed reading all of them, no matter if you make it or not :)
Note: We now have sixteen contestants, as imEmilynn joined a day late! Good luck guys!
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C O M M E N T S
!!= Favorites! (I choose 2 each round!)
I ADORED this oneshot! It was beautiful and well crafted and amazingly beautiful. I loved the fact that it was super meaningful and deep, but you balanced it out with some GOREGOUS Keefe and Sophie moments. I loved how you included the fire in such a creative way. I loved the way you utilized itallics and how the emotions and actions felt so raw and so in tune with the characters.
I loved that you used a ship that I've never seen before! Fintalina is something I've never considered before, and your oneshot actually made me kind of ship it! I liked how in this oneshot there was a lot of passionate movements happening, and you weren't scared to change what could have been a very calm and boring secret romance, into something passionate and real. I also really enjoyed that you went with a sad ending. That's not something you see often in ship oneshots.
I. LOVE. DARELLA! So, I might be slightly biased toward this ship (not really), but I truly loved the way you executed it! I liked how you had the story from Marella's P.O.V, I think her P.O.V is a harder one to write from because so many people see her in different ways. Is she angry inside? Sarcastic? But I loved the way you had it so she was full of self-doubt. It was interesting to see her view on pyrokinetics. And I adored the way Dex came to comfert her and that's how Darella started.
Tiana is one of my favorite ships so I was really happy that somebody wrote a oneshot on this one! I loved that you included the way Tam had to go to the Neverseen and the way Biana sent him off. I loved the way that it was Biana who realized her feelings for Tam first, and how Tam realized only after she left. It gives the ending a bittersweet feel that is normally hard to achieve in oneshots.
Marellinh is such an underrated ship and seeing this oneshot it made me want to ship it more! I enjoyed the friendship dynamic between Marella and Linh, and the fact you made it so Marella had a crush on Linh, but the readers don't know if it's the other way around. I enjoyed the fact that you had Marella temporarily "lose" herself in the fire and how Linh "pulled" her out. It's really nice seeing a onshot exploring the dynamic between Linh and Marella. Also enjoyed how Caprise was in it!
Sokeefe is adorable!! I loved how you had them going into Alluvettere and how they explored through all the painful and happy memories that happened to them there. I enjoyed all the details you added about the memories and the feelings that they had when they remembered them. I enjoyed how at the end, the both comferted each other and realized their feelings! It was cute!
I really liked how you included the water at the beach! And I think Keefe coming back to take pictures of Tam and Biana was really hilarious. It was really funny! I also enjoyed how Tam and Biana were really sweet together, and especially how they went to the beach. Seeing pictures of the clothes were also a very nice touch to help readers imagine the story better.
This. Was. So. AMAZING! I loved Oralie and Kenric's relationship and how they were sneaking around the other councillers. The description was amazing and the way you wrote every single sentence was so perfect and real, and descriptive. You are an amazing writer and I absolutley loved this oneshot! Oralie and Kenric's relationship felt so real, and the emotions were so raw and real.
DontKnow_DoesntCare
I loved the way that you had it focused on Dex! Mostly, it's usuallY Sophie who's confused over three guys and stuff, but I thought it was really interesting how this time you had Dex focusing on three girls! It was a nice twist. Also, I liked the fact that he wanted to focus on Biana, but felt his thoughts wandering towards Linh. It was a good representation of what crushes are like.
Dalina (Dirt x Alina) is definitley one of my OTP's now! The way you showed off Alina's self-absorbed ness was beautiful and I liked the way that you featured some of the other councillers too! I enjoyed when Alina's head set on fire the most and how she was always comparing herself to Della. I actually thought that Dalina was Della and Alina the first time I saw it.
I really enjoyed the AU! The way that you wrote in the flashback was really nice, especially in the way you featured Alvar's betrayal in the human world, and how Biana started drowning in the water because of it. I liked how Dex saved her and because he was the only one that knew CPR they kissed! It was a creative way for a Diana kiss to happen.
I really liked how you re-wrote Sofitz and how Fitz ended it with Sophie. Sophie's emotions felt real as she went over what happened with Fitz. The details on what happened felt really real, like it could happen. It was a great oneshot of emotions after a break up!
This was really cute! I loved the fact that you had Keefe and Sophie working together to make food, and how Sophie felt asleep, so Keefe dealt with it for her. It was really nice, and really adorable! I loved how in the end, there was the classic Grady telling Keefe to get out. It was really funny.
E L I M I N A T I O N
There will only be one elimination this round, because three people did not turn in their oneshots in time! So, I'm sorry but the three people who I did not see a oneshot from are EchoSong267 and That_Weird_Child. So, you guys will be eliminated! If you did turn in a oneshot, and I just missed it, please tell me and we will work something out!
So, after much consideration I'm very sorry, but I will be eliminating -thatonebookishgirl. Here are the reasons you have been eliminated:
1. The prompt was supposed to make me want to ship a ship, but instead, in your story, you didn't really make me want to ship anything at all! Your story was centered around how Fitz and Sophie broke up.
That's the main reason. Your writing is still amazing though! Keep writing! You are free to keep writing the prompts if you choose!
P R O M P T
Here's your next prompt! My way of giving prompts is a little different than how squishmallow09 does it! I will write a paragraph below in itallics and you must work that paragraph into your story somehow!
This _____ means a blank! You can fill anyone's name into it!
"_____! Stop it! You're gonna hurt somebody!"
"Stop worrying ______! It's going to be fine!"
"No it won't! Can't you see? You're ruining everything!"
That's the prompt!
Team Bold: I want you to write this in a human AU where the Keeper Crew are all their real ages! This is where Keeper Characters are all human, and are all the same age as in the books. No magic, a completely human story, with realistic things that could happen in our world!
Team SLANT : I want you to write this story in an Adult AU! The Keepers can be humans or elfs, but they MUST be adults. Mature, normal adults. By Adults, I mean Tam, Linh, Sophie, Fitz etc. You cannot do any adults that are already adults in the main series.
Please remember to tag respectthebangs and TheKeeperCommunity in the comments! Yes both of them in the comments of your oneshots!
This oneshot is due on Augest 28! I'm excited to read your interpretations!
C O N G R A T S
Congrats to SoKeefeKotlcFantasy and -crazycatgirl!!! Your oneshots were amazing! You are safe from the next round!
Congrats to everyone who has moved on!
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