The Slap!!!!!
Author's Note :
Hi sweeties...
This is a mini bite may be recreation for the scene in which kathir hit the moneylender... If you really like the police station sequence, then this mini bite would be boring to you because this has no much emotions portrayed and can no where come near gush of emotions of KM in that original track.... But i felt it was totally a illogical track where many relations where spoiled like paru-k Bond, the famous bromance, dignity of PS brothers by approaching jana, brothers hesitation for giving a word about baby shower inspite of having their brother in such a sitch,unnecessary intervention of meena, jana and so on...
It was one and only KM who is keeping it going inspite of all these sothapals is what i felt...
So i thought i should pen down a simple scene for this not complicating much...
As i dont have any TRP problems, i am finishing this off in a single scene...
Romba pesiten... Back to the scene...
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Parvathi and Mullai came inside the house after the moneylender left...
Parvathi took her seat frustrated and humiliated while mullai stood waiting for kathir with mixed emotions...
Kathir came in after sometime with his usual calm face but then it was like valconaoes erupting inside him...
A single trigger...
It would make him burst...
M : sari vaanga... sapidalam...
K : illaa... venam...
M : sapidathan eh ukanthom.. athukula ipadi... cha...
K : irukatum...
P : Yethuku adikanum...
Vaangina kadan ah kudukalaina saatham potu kelvi kekka than seivaagha... athuku adikaratha...
M to P : chhh... vidu ma...
M to K : Yenga neenga adichuruka venanga...
K : Avan thevai illama pesitu irunthan... athan adichen...
Kathir said under his gritted teeth....
P : yellam un appa ah solanum.. kadan vaangi vechutu yevano sethan nu kelambi poitaaru... avar irunthu bathil soliruntha ithelam nadanthurukuma...
M : chhh... maa... vaakuvaathathula kovathula yetho adichutaagha... vidariya...
P : Enakena kovathula adichataaru nu chumma vituduven... aana adi vaanginavaru chumma irupaara... avara yaru nu nenachenga.. avaru periya rowdy mullai...
Avaru yepadi patta aalu nu theriyuma ungaluku...
Nan than pesitu irunthen illa.. yethuku veliya kutitu poganum... sari samaathanama pesi mudinpinga nu paatha veeratha kaamichutu vanthurukenga... avaru kandipa chumma iruka mattaru...
Avaru adikaama ponathe periya vishyaam... ivar paatuku veliya kelambi pogum bothu yetha onnu kedaka onnu panita yena panrathu...
By now, mullai got what is her mother's concern about and parvathi's fears started passing to mullai...
The debts of father, happiness about mother's health everything took back seat and what mattered most was his safety... She started getting worst hallucinations of kathir getting hurt in different situations...
She couldnt get over it as they had already experienced a worst accident because of a vengeance...
Why cant it happen again...
The possibilities made her anxious...
She brooded over that last five minutes again and again in those few seconds...
M : yenga... yetha irunthalum pesi theethurukalam illa..
Yethuku kai neeti adikanum...
Ungaluku kovam konjam over ah thanga varuthu...
Yenga amma pesarathu ketta enake bayama iruke.. yetha onnu kedaika onnu agita... yenga ipadi yellam kovam varuthu ungaluku...
K : Athelam onnum aagathu...
P : Aama onnum aagathu.. apadiye nenachutu irunga... adi vanginavaru apadiye chumma vituduvaaru paarunga...
Vaddi ku kudukarathu na chumma ah naalu maasam vaddi kudukalaina thookitu poi adikara aalunga aavar yellam... avar kita ungaluku yenanga kovam...
M : Saatharanama mudiya vendiya vishayatha yenga ipadi perusu akineya...
Ungaluku kovam yellam poiduchu.. palaya madhiri yellam illa nu nenachutu irunthen... aana nenga palaya maadhiri than irukeya...
Ipo tha doctor amma ku onnum illa nu sonathum santhoshapattom... aana antha santhoshatha konja neram kuda iruka vidama keduthuteyale...
Kathir who was in verge of bursting up tried to move out but was stopped by mullai...
M : yenga... yenga... nillunga.. naa paatuku pesite iruken... ipadi pesama poite iruntha yenna artham...
Neenga inum maarave illanga... cha...
Mullai screamed with frustration and fear...
That was his last straw...
Kathir bounced back with all anger and irritation he had till now...
The annoyance being a irresponsible son in law who didnt know much on financial issues and debts of his father in law...
The fear of unrevealed health issues of his mother in law that was getting piled up in a nook of his heart...
The embarrassment of pleading the moneylender not because he was in a low receiving position but he could get how his wife would feel ashamed regarding her father's financial stability...
To their dismay, already she had a talk regarding this...
Added to all, The rage of sparing a bastard who spit venom in name of getting back money...
Still he couldnt get those words out of his mind how much time he ever tried...
The literal meaning that was hidden in his talks made him mad...
He cant believe that someone spoke in such a way about his wife to him and he just left him in few hits...
He should have strangled him to death...
When his mind and heart was overflowing with fire of all these, the more and more his wife and mother in law spoke pushed him to the extreme fiery mode....
Kathir was not so dumb not to understand their care and love in their words...
But he was not in a position to analyse much on it and get contended...
Finally...
After all positive changes in him and all his whooshing love for her, he is been accused of being the old kathir...
The old kathir...
Kathir with
No love...
No compassion...
No softness...
No calmness...
Nothing when it came to mullai...
Just anger...
Curtness...
Tactless...
And many more...
Is he the same...
Does she thinks so...
So what ever he had done for her, nothing had hit her heart...
With a shrieking pain and anger he shouted her in a roaring voice...
K : vaaya moodu...
Mullai who was dumbfounded with his raised voice looked at her mom didnt know how to react...
Parvathi rose up from her place in surprise and anger...
She cant be parvathi if she stayed quite seeing her daughter being scolded...
P : mapilla... neenga thappu panitu avala yen katharenga...
K : yena ipo thappu paniten nu chumma maathi maathi pesitu irukenga...
P : yen ivalo neram naanga sonathu puriyalaiya ungaluku...
Kadan kekka vanthavana thevai illama adichurukenga... avan periya rowdy vera... avanuku sarisamama neengalum rowdytha...
(Clearing throat) neengalum ipadi pananuma... nalaiki yetha prachanai nu vanthuta yenanga panrathu... ungalaiyum naanga paaka venama... athuku than eh bayapadarom.. tho ivalo bayapadara... athuku ava thappu pana madhiri avala poi katharenga... athum en munnadiye...
M : maa... vidu maa... yetho kovathula...
P : ne chumma iru de... ivalo neram itha solitu iruken... ivaruku puriyala... kadan kuduthavan kekka than seivan... nammalala kuduka mudiyalaina pesama than irukanum... namm...
Kathir interrupted in a calm voice...
K : kadan kuduthavan kadana ketta kudukalam... mudiyalaina pesaama irukaalam... sari than... aana ponna ketta... appovum pesaama irukanuma...
M : yenga....
P : mapillai...
Parvathi and mullai was completely taken aback while kathir continued in the same voice....
K : aama avan atha than kettan... inga porul yethum illaa.. athuku bathil ah ponna thookava nu...
Athuku na pesaama vanthuruntha ungaluku santhoshama irunthurukum polaiye...
Apadi than eh...
Mullai's eyes filled up with tears while parvathi's was full of rage...
K : Yenamo sonnengale neengale pesi sari panirupenga... na than ipadi thappu thappa paniten nu... avan intha varthai ah unga kita soliruntha yena panirupenga....
P : vetti poturupen...
Parvathi's voice scorched the room...
K : ithan... intha kovam than enakum vanthuchu...
Aana nan neenga sonatha yen panala nu en melaiye enake verupaa iruku.... avana yen chumma vitten nu enmelaiye enaku kovam varuthu...
Ithu puriyaama mela pesi enna inum athigama kovapaduthathenga...
He turned to mullai in a jiffy...
K : yenamo palaya madhiriye than iruke nu soniye... ithe palaya kathir ah irunthu iruntha ipadi than naalu adi oda viturupaana nu yosi...
Mullai nodded her head as no with tears flowing...
M : sorry nga... enaku... enaku...
She struggled for words in between tears...
The vulgar words spoken by the fellow was giving her tough time to maintain calm...
She could even visualise how kathir would have felt hearing to all...
Kathir placed his hand firmly on her shoulder as a gesture of soothing her with a slight tap on it...
It really did magic on mullai's tears while her hand reached for his hand on her shoulders...
Everything happened in just few seconds and parvathi apologised for the same...
P : manichurunga mapilla... ithu theriyaama naanum neraya pesiten...
K : illaa.. paravala... melotama paatha na senjathu thappu madhiri than irukum... athum neenga enakaga than eh pesinenga... paravala...
M : yenga....ipadi asingama pesare aalu nijamave ungala yetha panita..
K : inga paaru... konjam avan mela vekkara bayatha vitutu en mela nambikkai vei... yevanum enna onnum pana mudiyaathu... thairiyaama iru...
P : na mudhala un appa ku kupitu vara solren... ivalo nadanthurukum bothu intha manushan anga poi ukanthutu irukaaru...
K : atha... mama ah konjam udane kelambi vara sollunga...
P : saringa mapilla...
Parvati called up murugan, informed the same and he started immediately from trichy...
K : intha kadan ellam irukanala than eh kandavanum vanthu ipadi pesaran... mudhala atha mudichu viduvom...
Na kadai ku poi panam...
M : venanga... anga yellam kekka venam....
K : velaiyadariyaa nee.. namma veetula irunthu yedutha yena...
M : illaa yerkanave amma ku hospital selavu ku panam kuduthathuke meena oru madhiri paathagha... ithelam periya thogai... venam... prachanai varum... enakum asingama irukum...
P (angrilly): oh ho... mapilla enaku selavu panathu antha panakaara marumaghaluku pidikalaiyaama... namma selavula paisa selavu illama kalyanam panikitaale... athelam maranthu pochaama...
M : maaa... konjam chumma irukiya... yenga anga yellam kekka venam... avalo than please...
K : ithelam yosikara nerama ithu...
M : venam... avalo than... nammaku mukkiyama enaku anga mariyaathai irukathu... appuram unga ishtam...
K : sari vidu...
He moved to the entrance , made some calls and came back to the duo...
K : na veliya poitu konja nerathula vanthudaren... neenga sapidunga...
M : yenga... yenga poreya... thaniya...
K : ipo than sonen... en mela konjam nambikkai vei nu... appuram yena thaniya...
M : unga mela nambikkai iruku... engala thaniya vitutu pogatheya nu sonen...
K : athukum bathil athu than...
At the same time, Kanna entered the house...
Ka : anne...
He was not the playful champ as always... His no smile face told he is well informed of the things happened...
K : vanthutiya da...
Ka : inga paakathula than ne irunthen...
K: sari... ne ingaye iru... na vanthudaren...
Ka : iruken ne... na paathukaren....ne poitu vaa...
Kathir nodded his head at parvathi and mullai...
K to M : nambikai vei... thaniya vituda matten...
Before mullai could reply, kathir started from the house...
(So post that things happened as in serial, the moneylender went to police station, all bla blas and police comes to mullai home to take them to police station.. I dont want to elaborate on that scene...)
Back to mullai home...
Ka : yethuku sir station ku kupidarenga... yena karanam...
Inspector : kadan thirupi ketathuku un annan avara adichurukaaru...
K : yaaru adicha...
It was then kathir entered the house again...
In : ithu yaaru...
P : ithu than en mapilla...
In : oh adichathu ivaru than ah...
K : yaaru adicha... yaara adicha...
Kanna was smirking at his brother's answer while mullai and parvathi were looking as if he was speaking a different language...
In : neenga kadan thirupi kettu veetuku vanthavara adikkala...
K : yaaru kadan kettu vantha... na yethuku avangala adikanum...
In : dei...intha poi elam engakita venam... enaku yellam theriyum... mudhala station ku kelambu...
K : yena velaiyaadarengala... na kadan kettu vantha yaaraiyum adikave illaa.. na yethuku station ku varanum...
In : nee than adicha.. avaru complaint kuduthurukaaru... unnayum un motha familyyum station ku...
K : niruthunga... mudhala Saatchi iruka unga kita... unga ishtathuku vanthu pesikitu irukenga... yentha saatchi yum illama verum complaint vechu station ku kupidarenga... sari athu kuda paravala... aana motha family um yethuku varanum... ladies yelam..
Ka : anne.. na than sonen illa ne... ivaru vanthathula irunthu ipadi than pesararu... unaku than nan whatsapp la video anupinane...
K : haaan... paathen da... appuram than vanthen... solunga yenga varanum ipo... na varen... complaint kuduutha aala vara sollunga.. pesalam... veetula irunthelam yaarum vara mattanga... aana ipadi saatchi eh illama vanthu kupidarathuku ,ladies kita mariyaathai illama pesinathu, poi complaint kudukarathuku nu unga mela na complaint kudukaren... appuram pesalam...
Ka : anne video maranthudathe...
The inspector who was rude to mullai and parvathi and blurted out some unparliamentary words did get a tinge of fear...
He left the place immediately with a note he would come back with proper witnesses soon...
Next few hours were completely occupied for kathir...
He arranged for money, took murugan who arrived from trichy and went to meet the moneylender leaving kanna at home...
Mu : mapillai... ipadi agum nu nan eh ethir paakala... romba kashtamagiduchu... enaku...
K : mama... mudhala antha panatha kuduthutu vanthu mathatha pesikalam... vaanga povom...
Mu : mapillaa panam...
K : neenga vaanga mama...
They reached the person's house who was infuriated looking at them...
ML : oh kadana ketta anga adichathu mattum illama veedu thedi adika vanthurukengala... sariyana poikaara kudumbam polaiye... adikave illaa nu police la saathichiyam... saatchi venum nu soniyam...
K : neenga kuda than na adichathula bayangara aadi pattu hospital la irukenga nu poi solirukenga.. neenga yena hospital la ya irukenga...
ML : dei...
K : inga paarunga... na poi solala... kadan panatha thirupi kettathuku na unna... ungala... adikalaiye.. atha than nan polica layum sonnen...
kadan ah kadan ah ketta varaikum nanum mariyaathaiya than pesinen... unga varthai thappanathum than na kaai vechen... oru 2 nimisham yosichenga na athu ungaluke puriyum... na unga veetuku vanthu unga pondatti ah thookava nu ketta neenga chumma irupengala...
Mu : antha madhiri varthai yelam en ponnu nu illa... yaara paathum pesalama thambi... ungalukum oru kudumbam iruku... unga veetulaiyum ponnunga irukanga... athu thirumba ungaluku nadaka yevalo naal agidum... kadan ah thirupi kudukathathu en thappu.. athuku neenga enna enna vena pesalam.. athuku nu oru varai murai illaya...
K : vidunga mama...ivar kita athelam pesi priyojanam illa...
Inthanga... ithula vaddi, asal rendume iruku... sari paathutu engaluku enga pathiratha kuduthudunga...
They got the documents from him settling everything...
K : ini poi police complaint, aal vechu adikarathu yena vena panunga... nanga athaiyum paathukarom... varom...
They left the place leaving the moneylender in little distress and little irritation...
Mullai home..
M : appuram antha aalu onum solaliya...
K : yena sola mudiyum... avan pesinathu thappu nu avanuke theriyum... police kita poium velaiku agala... kaasu namma kuduthachu... ini yena iruku pana...
P : aanalum mapilla... avan kovathula...
M : maa... avugha paathupagha ma enaku nambikkai iruku... nee vidu...
Kathir let out a satisified smile after long hours of tension...
Ka : aama anne.. antha video ah yena pana...
K : athula yena da iruku.. chumma antha police pesarathu than eh... vei paapom... aana veetula intha vishayatha pathi moochu kuda vidathe...sari ah....
Ka : athelam sola matten ne... kavalai padathe...
M : aama... kanna ne ivughaluku video anupina nu sonne.. ivugha phone la yepadi da WhatsApp...
Ka : anni.. athu ungaluku than theriyum... antha police ku theriyaathu illaa...
M : sari than...
The situation got lighter with sudden change of things and kanna took a leave....
But the family had one more issue to sort out...
Mu : mapilla.. panam...
Mullai and parvathi too looked at kathir with a confused face...
K to M : veetula yaarukitayum kekkala... kavalai padathe...
inthanga mama... neenga enaku vaangi kudutha chain, bracelet, mothiram elame adagu vechuten.. athukana bill...
P : yena mapilla neenga...
Mu : athu ungaluku naanga aasaiya...
He couldn't complete the sentence thinking of past... Yes, it was not purchased for him...
K : athu unga ponnoda purushanukaga neenga asaiya vanginathu than...athunala than naanum atha bathirama kalyanathula irunthu bureau la vechurunthen... chumma irukarathuku ipo ithuku payanpadatum...
Mu : aanalum ungaluku...
K : na venam nu solaliye... neenga panam vanthathum mettu kudunga... athuku than bill kuduthen... nan...
M(smirking) : thirumba bureau la vechuduvaru... sari than eh nga...
K : sari than...
There was a wide smile in all faces...
P : aanalum ithu engaluku sari ah padala mapilla...
K : enna intha veetu aala nenechengana sari ah padum... illana padaathu atha...
P : sari than mapilla...
Mu : sikiram mettu tharom mapilla... neenga nalla gambirama potukonga...
K : saringa mama...
Mu : appuram romba nand...
K : thirumba solren... intha veetu aala nenacha nandri yellam sola matenga...
Mu : illaa mapilla... nanga yethume solala... namma vettu vishayatha neenga paathenga... avalo than..
Ammadi mullaa..
Intha madhiri oru prachanai la kuda santhosham varum nu ipo than theriyuthu....
Avalo santhosham ma enaku... romba romba santhosham...
M : enakum pa...
Murugan teared up a little seeing happy mullai while parvathi grinned at kathir...
KM room in mullai house...
After a happy meal, Kathir and mullai went to their room...
A lone time after a huge chaos was something both were longing for...
But when they got a time for themselves, fresh tears started flowing from her eyes again...
She wanted to hug him tight and yes, he wanted her to be in his embrace...
They hesitated for few seconds which felt like a decade... Kathir made the first move opening his arms wide and mullai plunged into his arms sobbing...
K : intha...
M :...
K : azhathe.. kashtama iruku...
M : azhugai ah varuthunga...
K : ippo onum agidala than eh... nan irukene... appuram yena azhugai...
He tried to lift her face to wipe her tears but she who got the comfort from his chest more refused to look at him...
M : yethum agala than... neenga irukeya than... yepovum irupeya than... aanalum ithelam... yenamo madhiri irukunga... intha pechelam....
K : atha pathi yosikaathe... avarum kadana vasool pananum nu oru athigarathula pesirukalam.... bathil ku namma yena pananumo panitom... antha kadana kuduthachu... pathiratha meetachu... pothum... athu mudinju pona vishayam... yosika venam atha pathi...
M : hmmm saringa... namma veetula... kannanuku vera...
Her voice became low...
K : namma veetula yaaru kaathukum pogaathu... kanna velaiyaatu paiyan than... aana oru vishayam venam nu sona kandipa pana mattan... avan sola mattan...
M : aanalum antha nagai elam...
She started and stopped in a second...
M : sari namma kashtathuku than eh namma nagai ah adagu vechom... paravala... meetudalam...
K(smiling) : hmmm meetu bureau la vechudalam...
M(grinning) : vechudalam... vechudalam...
They stood frozen for sometime and moved away from eachother with a sheepish smile...
K : ipo nalla than eh iruke...
M : romba nalla irukenga...
K : appo thoonguvoma...
M : hmm sari nga...
K (with a concealed smile) : aasari kedachara... illa paai than ah...
M : athellam kedaicharu.. ini satham varathu..
K : appo sari...
They lied down in the bed with eyes locked...
It was not only the eyes that were locked but also the hands...
Author's Note :
Oru mini bite ku rendu author's note too much than... I am sorry for that... I started off this mini bite with so much interest... I guess the starting part was kinda ok... but i know poga poga sothapiruken... athum nalla theriyum... After seeing the promo, i literally had a urge to delete this one... But then i had promised few darlings that i would write a mini bite for this track and publish it today... So i completed somehow and postinf it... I know its one of my worst writing....but pardon me... sathiyama mudiyala... Ithu one of a mokkai PS episode nenachukonga... nandri hai... 😪😪😪😪😪
na poi PMN elutharen...
PS :
No spelling proof or proper rereading and drafting done... athukum sorry...
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