Hey everyone! Thanks for the reads! I get people might like this book the way it is but I'm thinking about rewriting it and adding more dialogue and detail. And maybe more of a back story? Maybe make it so Jay is with 5k and instead of crows he was raised by Jay and her family. Then she would meet 10k when they all meet 5k. And Jay meets 10k and stays with him when 5k goes missing. So she is with them when the shoot out happens and stuff. Then she sneaks onto the sub and also gets bit by murphy (Since we all know he loafs Jay ;3) since he has a soft spot for her (idk Murphy is unpredictable maybe he had a cat and wants to save her.) I bet he got a mouthful of fur... Anywho! So then she is under Murphy's control even tho he could've just thrown me onto the boat... So then I'm at 'Murphyville'. Good? Good. Imma do it.