I'm going to copy and paste my notes from when i first drafted the first few chapters of the story.

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Chapter one: judy can just be at wORK WORK WORK WORK WORK or whatever then she gets reminded that she has to meet he bae at the trainstation bcuz Nick is coming home from visiting his mother

(As you can tell I obviously changed some stuff from first draft)

Nick can be happy to see his crush waiting for him but Judy being Judy she knocked out on the bench AND SHE LOWKEY SHOULD GET RAPED BY YOGI BEAR OR KING JULIAN that's definitely going to be in / the story. So the Nick sits but her and they fall asleep on each other thenthey wake up and Judy is surprised to see Nick and they hug and Judy being all goddamn emotional and shit she huggs him back.

Den lightning strikes and they fall to the ground and nick busts his head open. Just freaks out and he okay tho so no worry. Kust decides to take nick to him house so he can rest but she lowkey just want dat boi ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) so he goes and sleep in the guest room (dnt forget to make this cringey) so then lighting strikes and Judy booty gets scared and goes and sleep next to Nick.

Nick all like 'hell yea I'm bout to get sum' (les keep it PG)  but it's still the first chapter and judy is still a virgin like me...T^T

Chapter two: they wake up and nick comments on how judy looks like a melting Barbie doll becuse she WOKE UP LIKE DAT and she get all sensitive because the bitch can't take a joke. She feel sum type of way and runs away crying (don't forget to add they they get excused from work or whatever) so Judy finds her sister's pills which her sister June had when she was over. June is a thic chick so she got thic chick pills no offense my mom thick so it really don't matter because thick chicks SLAYYY

So judea take those pills and pssses out. Nick find her and he's like WTF gurl you so ducking skinny how u overdose on pills?? judy obviously still passes out. He take his bunny to the haspatil (yes haspital cuz it's 234am and its cold as fuxk in my grandmas house)  so he asks her why does she take them pills. She should be all sad and stuff (make this extra sad so ppl can relate and they can be sad but don't make it too sad bcuz they might be suicidal then they kill demselves and then no one reads) he says some cute stuff like 'you are beautiful JUST DA WAY YOU ARE AND WHEN YOU SMILE) just still song lyrics(

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That's all I'm putting because things get hectic. I'm dead serious guys I was such a mess when I started this book. ^ obviously. I mean...let me know if you actually want to see more of these drafts..??

See yah. Oh and if you are offended bcuz you're thicc...

IM FUCKING SKINNY LIKE A TOOTHPICK AND GUYS LIKE GIRLS WITH AN ASS AND ALL I GOT IS A FLAT PANCAKE. consider yourself lucky.

>:3

Jkjkjk
(I'm serious)