After school, Kevin felt awesome! He walked home with only a black eye, bloody nose, and busted lip (OUCH). As he turned for the corner, Edd walked out in front of him. Kevin, startled , fell on his butt.
"Where are you going?" Edd said in a evil voice! "My house." Kevin said, disguise in "ON" mode. "Come over to my house." Edd said. "My parents are gone for business..." Kevin said, " So sure!" "Awesome!" Edd said. And with that they walked down the street, Edd inching closer to the red/copper haired boy.
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