So I'm sick so I thought that I would work on my god awful drawing "skills", and I think I improved a bit-

I tried to base it off of an OC I made in Gacha Life, and yes, I know, "i use that?" BUT DON'T JUDGE IT'S GOOD FOR MAKING OC'S OKAY-

Anyway. I'll put in what I based it off of, and then the photo. I really need construction criticism, cause all of my friends are so fricken good at drawing and then there's me-

Gacha Life:

Drawing: