Hey guys I just thought of a song and wanted you to read it and give me opinions on it. Here we go.

Smiling face

I want to see your smiling face
I want to hear you laugh and play.
I never want you to be alone,
You will always have a home.

Never gonna let you fall
Always gonna call.
Thanks to you I can stand so tall.

I'm going to be the light in the dark
You make me feel so special,
I can only watch
As you walk off.

I want to see your smiling face
I want to hear you call my name.
Your never going to on your own,
Cause I will be your home.

Hate when you leave
Love when you stay
I will always be here
Even if I am not her.

I justed to say.

I want to see your smiling face
I want to hear you laugh and play.
I never want you to be alone,
You will always have a home.

When I see you smile
I know i can run a mile.
When your sad
I know you had a very bad day

But may I say?

I just need a smile on your face
And I know I can rest
Peacefully in my gave.
I can remember,
Last November
When I saw you with her
But at least your smile never faded.

You was always there
When my heart was teared
Into tiny pieces
And now it's my turn to be able
Never mind the way
I say....

I want to see your smiling face
I want to hear you laugh and play.
I never want you to be alone,
You will always have a home.

End!

What do you think?

Asano: needs work!

Hey! I thought it was ok.

Asano: it is....but it needs work. Alot of it.

Meanie~

Asano: sometimes the truth hurts.