Reviewer: fire_dragon_24 

Ruby Red Threads: Akiramado 

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Title (5/5):

I really love the title. It is perfect for the book, and I love the fact that it relates to the characters name, and the theme behind the book. It couldn't have been better!

Cover (5/5):

The cover is also great. It represents the book accurately, and makes the book look very interesting because of it's simplicity. I found it very intriguing, and that is great. Unfortunately, books are judged by their covers. Thankfully, that's not a problem for this book, as the cover is also great.

Blurb (5/5):

I really, really love the blurb of this book! It provides a perfect picture for the reader, and tells them exactly what kind of a book they will read. It is interesting, and very hooking. The cover and title compliment the blurb, which makes the chances for the book to be given a chance higher. It is absolutely perfect, but I have provided some ways in which it can be made even better. None of these things have to be applied to it.

Fate. A predetermined power. It exists, it gives, it takes and it controls. The requisite force spins vibrant, red strings that flow into the world, binding themselves to people who are destined to love each other.

Rubi Amari was born with a remarkable power that allows her to see the strings that announce the fate of a being. However, there is a drawback. One that makes Ruby not want her power. She is not bound to anyone with any kind of a connection, meaning that she's completely alone in the world. So, when she sees two soulmates walk past each other, completely oblivious to their perpetual connection, she plays her part, ensuring that their paths cross. She simply thinks of it as the purpose of her life.

But all her beliefs go for a toss when she meets two stubborn idiots. A thin line of red stretches between the two oblivious boys, but they refuse to fall in love. Since all of Rubi's beliefs are at stake, she wants nothing more than to bring the two boys closer together. And that's exactly what she does. Or at least tries to.

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Once again,, the blurb doesn't have to be changed to this. The decision is completely up to the author.

Genre (5/5):

The book is definitely one that is based around romance. All of the aspects of romance are included, and no changes need to be made here.

Originality (10/10):

I was extremely surprised at how original this book was. I've never read anything like it, and the unique plot made me feel beyond excited. This is a point that captures a readers attention, and keeps them hooked to the book. Since the "what will happen next?" question can't be answered due to the original plot, most will want to finish the book and find out the answer to that question. I was seriously impressed by the amount of originality, and commend the author on it.

Description (9/10):

The description in the book is beyond amazing. It describes the scenes and the characters emotions perfectly, which gives the reader a platform to deeply understand what is going on in the book. However, I will say, in some parts of the book, I felt like the description could be cut down a bit, and more events or scenes could be added. Sometimes, a reader gets bored with the lack of events happening, and drops the book. If only a little bit of the descriptions could be reduced, the book would be perfect.

Character development (10/10):

The book is only just finishing the first of the stages of a book that I have set for all books (introduction and start of the plot). This means that not a lot of character development needed to be done. The amount done by the author is great, and doesn't need any changes. For future reference, I would suggest that the character development should increase once a big event occurs. This will make the book seem more natural, as most people's personality develops once a distinct event takes place in their life.

Plot (10/10):

As I mentioned in the section about originality, the plot is truly astounding. It drives the reader in, not letting them go until and unless the book is completed. The right amount of information is given out in every chapter, and each one is left at an intriguing ending statement. Not exactly a cliffhanger, but a line that urges the reader to scroll down, and continue reading the next chapter. The uniqueness makes the plot even more interesting. The book is written in a way which keeps you gasping all of the time. Surprise after surprise throws itself on your face, and leaves you in evident shock.

This is an excellent technique for an author to use in a book, as it is another hooking factor. I really loved the plot and would like to say "Outstanding job!" to the author for it.

Grammar (14/15):

The grammar was almost perfect. Words and punctuation were used correctly. However, I did spot a few typos every two chapters or so. But this can easily be fixed if the book is edited even once.

Structure (5/5):

The structure is also perfect. There were no errors that I found in the layout of the page, and how paragraphs and the scenes with speech included were divided. That is something that people don't know how to do properly, so I commend the author on it.

Vocabulary/Spelling (10/10):

I loved the use of vocabulary in the book. It complimented the descriptions, and gave the author a unique writing style. This feature caught my eye, and I loved the extra personalized touch given to the book.

Overall enjoyment (10/10):

Excuse my use of informal language, but holy fudge did I love this book! It left me on my toes, and although I read it all at once, I was anticipating every next scene. The plot is extremely unique, and completely fascinated me. The book doesn't have any big errors, and I can only recommend the author to complete it, put it up for some awards and publicize it in any way possible.

To the author: Your book is terrific, and left me in utter bliss. I think you can definitely win quite a few awards with it, and it will most definitely go to a lot of places. Thank you SO much for asking me to review this piece of pure art! Keep doing the amazing work that you!re doing today!

-Ria