AN: This book is strictly 18+. kindly skip if you are not comfortable.

Many told that they didn't receive notification of my announcement and so i am texting here. Sorry for disturbing and asking here. 

I got a request from my beloved follower to try on Bangalore days. I was also informed that someone had tried that, started a book but stopped in the middle. So as per the request, I decided to write that. 

 Anyone interested in reading Bangalore days in Ashaangi version especially in my way. There will be a change in the plot but the characteristics are the same. (I don't want my story to be reported, so changed the plot... There will be many similarities but sure you will feel the difference.). Based on the response I will make it as a one shots or a short story. 

Ashwin (Siddhik) as Professor who is a Scientist previously.
Sivaangi (Athulya) as a completed degree student who is ready for marriage.
Pragyan (as an RJ) and Sujan (biochemist) as Sivaangi friends.Title-- Thedalgal Theerathini

Whether you want it as a short story or one shots... 

Those who already answered this can ignore.. Will wait till this weekend for the response, decide and plan to publish on Monday.

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In the hotel room, 

Durga- "Jeeva.. intha case pathi konjam sollu"

Sanjeev- "ena thideernu unaku arvam vanthiruku?"

Durga- "next time crime scene pogum pothu theda use agum.."

Sanjeev- "enna theda pora?"

Durga- "ethayavathu theduven.. keta kelviku pathil sollu daa.."

Sanjeev- "uanku ethu varaikum therium nu sollu.. athuku apuram ullatha naan solren"

Durga- "inga kolai nadakuthu.. but evidence la namma oor karangaloda kai regai kidaikuthu.. twist ennana avanga yerkanave sethupoitanga.. ivlo thaan therium.."

Sanjeev- "hmm, pothuva namma uyiroda irukurapo edukura kai regaikum, setha piragu edukura kai regaikum difference irukum... romba perusa irukathu, mild ah irukum.., blood laium irukum"

Durga- "oho"

Sanjeev- "anna, inga kidaicha kai regaila, blood la antha mathiri difference illa.. blood la sila chemical composition irunthathu .. so dead bodies ah velila edutha clue kidaikum nu paathen.. aana dead bodies anga illa."

Durga- "apadina, antha ponangala unaku clue kidaika koodathunu eduthutu poitangala?"

Sanjeev- "avanga iranthutangala nu enaku doubt ah iruku.."

Durga- "athula epadi doubt varum unaku, oore koodi sadangu pani thane pothachirukanga.."

Sanjeev- "naan than sonenae chemial composition irunthathunu... Medical science la ellame possible thaan silvandu. so namma ella pakamum yosikanum.. just oru kai regai-kaga oru aala konurupanganu ninaikuriah?"

Durga- "athukaga illaina apuram enna organ donation ah? Kaki sattai padathula vara mathiri..", she yawned while asking this. 

Sanjeev- "istapattu kodutha thaan donation.. ithu thiruttu"

Durga- "killer istapattu thane kodukaran.. apo avan client ku ithu donation thaane..". Sanjeev glared at her.. 

Durga- "okay okay, Organs thiruttu nu vachukalam.. athane?"

Sanjeev looked at the files and said, "irukalam. silvandu padam vera valkai vera, compare panatha.. Namma oorla antha ponatha velila eduka koodathu makala thoondi vitathu Praba mama thaan. athe pola avar meet pana ponathu inga irukura oru Business man ah thaan, Malaysia la branch vachirukar.. avar business kum namakum samanthame illa.. ellame idikuthu.. sethu ponathu ellame inga irukura caste oda thalaivargal. ipadiye pona peria problem vedikum.. oru caste makkal ku adutha caste mela santhegapattu adichukuvanga.. Nalaiku namma antha business man ku sonthama irukura hospital poi check pananum.. 'Heavenly Travels' la Praba mama kooda partner yaarunu kandupudikanum... appo thaan.", he turned to see Durga. 

Durga is sleeping peacefully. Sanjeev giggled, closed the files, switched off the lights so that it will not disturb her and lied down next to her. Once he lied next to her, She automatically rolled over and hugged Sanjeev. Sanjeev smiled, hugged her and kissed her forehead as well as cheeks.

Durga- "disturb panatha Jeeva, eluntha apuram poi killer ah pudikalam.. avanum thoongitu thaan irupaan...", she mumbled in sleep and cuddled with him. 

Sanjeev smiled, cuddled with her and slept in minutes. 

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The next day, they got up and started to plan for the day. 

Sanjeev-"silvandu, namma inaiku Organ transplantation panika pora mathiri thaan poga porom.. fake medical reports vanthiduchu, romba mosama irukura mathiri ithula mension paniruku... already namakaga appointment potachu. naan koodave thaan irupen."

Durga- "yaruku panaporom nu potruku.."

Sanjeev- "enaku thaan". Durga glared at him with anger.

Sanjeev- "silvandu, ithu ellam poi than. tension agatha.. Naan un visayathula risk eduka mudiathu..". Durga pouted and nodded. 

Sanjeev then explained her. She just nodded for everything. They both got ready for the hospital after finishing the breakfast.

Durga- "Jeeva, epadi iruken.. unaku konjam match agura mathiri select paniruken.. nalla iruka?"

Sanjeev didn't answer her but looked at her like eating her. 

Durga- "Jeeva, nee vela paka vanthiruka.. killer ah paka poganum..". Sanjeev took long breathe more than twice to control himself. Durga giggled at him. 

Sanjeev- "silvandu, ratchasi.. yethuku di enna kolra? ipo ena plan la nee ipadi enna seendura mathiri dress podura?"

Durga- "Namaloda intha live-in relationship time la namaku cute memories venum la athuku thaan.."

Sanjeev- "ethu? live-in relationship la irukoma? silvandu, yaar sonna unaku itha?". He was shocked to the core.

Durga- "nane kandu pudichen Jeeva. ", she raised her imaginary collar with a victorious smile.

Sanjeev- "kandu pudichiah?", Sanjeev furrowed his eyebrows. 

Durga- "Nee OK Kanmani padam pathathu illaya?". Sanjeev looked at her questioningly nodding as no.

Durga- "antha padathula live-in relationship concept thaan eduthurupanga.. athulaium kalaila velaiku poitu night vanthu kasamusa panuvanga.. Namalum apaadi thane.. nee thinamum kalaila kolai panna pova.. illa illa, case paka pova ... night vanthathum kasamusa panuvom illaina kati pudichu thoonguvom..  ithuku peru thaan live-in relationship Jeeva.. apadi paatha, naan sonathu correct thane Jeeva?"

Sanjeev looked at her with a unbelievable look.

Durga- "appo, .... ithu live-in relationship thane jessi... athu, tha ba.. tha... Jeeva?", she started saying dramatically but missed at the end.

Sanjeev- "intha dialogue-um antha padathodathu thana?"

Durga- "illa Jeeva. ithu Vinnai thandi Varuvaya film odathu.. antha padathula.. ". Sanjeev stared at her with folded hands. 

Durga rolled her eyes once and said, "intha kadhai unaku theria vendam, athula lovers pirinjuduvanga.. so choice la vitudalam.. vaa kilambuvom.. adutha killer ah paaka time aachu".. she moved hurriedly.

Sanjeev left out his breathe, nodded his head as no, but giggled at the end. Though his words are mean to reduce her naughtiness, he enjoys that. He is not strict with her. He just say once and leave it as per her wish. 

It is hard for him to move his eyes from her. She is very enthusiastic with him. She is carefree and fearless with him. It looks like she is like this exclusively for Jeeva. He could witness and feel a major difference in her with him. Even the naughtiness with others have no limits when he is near to her. If he is not present, her naughtiness will be limited. Anyone can easily experience that. With him, Her eyes will always have a shine and spark. Her lips will always be smiling. She just need him next to her to be happy. His presence is enough for her. Sanjeev could understand and feel her. 

They reached the hospital and gave entry with fake names. The receptionist told them to wait for some minutes. After a while, they were called inside. 

Doctor- "sollunga ungaluku enna problem?"

Durga- "ungaluku than ini problem doctor", Her words are sarcastic but she said in a sad tone so that he will not understand.

Doctor- "Dont lose hope, sari panidalam"

Durga-"engaluku irukura problem ku apadi thonala doctor, enga problem ah neenga unga problem ah ninachu sari pani kodunga.. naanga ungala thaan nambi irukom... aandavane offer la irangi vantha mathiri irukeenga.. engala kaapathunga doctor.."

Doctor- "organ transplantation ellam inaiku satharama agiduchu.. neenga ivlo bayapada vendia avasiyamae illa.."

Durga- "nijamava? ithuku munnadi neenga panirukeengala?"

Doctor- "yes. I have 3 years experience in this.."

Durga- "verum 3 thana? ennaga, ivara nambalama? illa vera ethavathu peria doctor kita polama?"

Doctor- "just 3 nu pakatheenga. Naan intha 3 years la neraiah operation paniruken. You just dont worry and relax.."

Sanjeev- "Sorry doctor. ava konjam en mela.."

Doctor- "I can understand.", he smiled in a friendly way and said, "unga luck, Ipo donor-um available ah irukanga.. so seekramae panidalam. "

Durga- "Donor kidachutangala. Thank god.", she acted perfectly. 

Doctor- "yes. Appo neenga inaike admit agidareengala?"

Sanjeev- "yes doctor. "

Doctor- "nurse.." A nurse came and started the procedure. 

Sanjeev- "oru important work iruku, naanga poitu 4 hours la vanthiduvom..". Nurse nodded her head. They both left the hospital. 

Durga- "donor irukangalamae.. appo namma oorla oru case poiducha?"

Sanjeev- "amam, Ramasamy"

Durga- "vadakupatti ramasamy poitara?"

Sanjeev- "What? ithuvum padama?", He turned towards her having his hand in his hip and asked her.

Durga- "ithu ellam comedy channel clippings Jeeva, padam pakanum nu avasiyamae illa"

Sanjeev -" nee romba kettu poita, silvandu.."

Durga- "nee thane..", Sanjeev closed her lips hurriedly.

Sanjeev- "yei, naan antha meaningla solala di.. "

Durga removed her hand and said, " naanum antha meaninga la solala Jeeva. Nee thane bore adicha TV paarunu sonna, nanum pathen. athula ithu thaan vanthathunu solla vanthaen..", her eyes shined with naughtiness.

Sanjeev-"nambiten di..  un kannu soliduchu nee enna sola ninachen nu". Durga moved her eye balls here and there, buckled her body in shy and smiled. 

Sanjeev closed his eyes, took some seconds to control himself and said, "silvandu, intha pakkam vaa polam..". Durga too composed herself and went with him. 

They slowly entered into the hospital with a mask in their face again, pretending like other patient relatives and started to walk around the corridor. They almost took a note of everything but everything seems to be normal. 

Durga- "Jeeva, intha pakam polama? please please". Sanjeev nodded and went. It has high security too. They cheated them and went in. 

They are shocked to see human bodies there. It is not even a mortuary room. But there are almost 8-10 bodies.

Durga-"pathiah en choice thaan correct. intha pakam thaan ellathaium vachirukanga.. nee romba lucky Jeeva unaku ipove purinchiduchu"

Sanjeev- "ennathu?"

Durga- "pondatti pecha kekanum. meera koodathunu". Sanjeev's lips automatically curved with a smile. He took some photos of that. Durga was looking at him the whole time. 

Sanjeev- "enna pakura? vaa polam. athaan kandupudichachulla"

Durga-"nee romba alaga iruka Jeeva. Ipo sathaamae varama oru siripu sirichiyae.. appo romba cute ah iruntha.. nee ipadi thaan ella case-um deal panuviah? chinna siripoda.."

Sanjeev froze at her words. She is right. He is smiling at this danger situations. He is smiling even after standing before all the bodies. They heard some foot steps. Sanjeev held her hand hurriedly and hide behind a big berol with her. Unknowingly, He hugged her tight and burry herself in him. Durga smiled at his care. He is keenly observing the happening. Durga is observing him.

Two men came in and looked around. They confirmed that no one is inside, went out and closed the door. They locked it. Sanjeev left out a long breathe and relaxed. 

Durga- "enna scent Jeeva use panra? aala thookuthu". Sanjeev looked at her eyes. It has only admiration, there is no fear in it. 

Sanjeev- "unaku bayama illaya?"

Durga- "illa jolly ah iruku. nee ipadi katti pudichutu irukum pothu bayam ellam varuma Jeeva?". Sanjeev smiled at her. 

Durga- "Enaku oru doubt. ivanga CCTV check pana namma vanthathu therinjidume.. "

Sanjeev- "naama admit aanathume naan jammer ah activate paniten. CCTV work agathu..". 

Durga- "nee peria KD thaan Jeeva."

Sanjeev took his phone and texted someone.. He then started to remove the glass from the window. 

Durga-"hai, jannal valiah kuthichu irangi thapika poroma?"

Sanjeev- "amam, ena irukama pudichuko.. ithu ground floor athunala romba height ah irukaathu.. "

Durga- "Cinema la paathathu ellam en life-layae nadakuthu.. thoku Jeeva", she extended her hands at him to lift her. Jeeva lifted her with a smiling face and helped her to jump outside. 

He jumped excitedly. Sanjeev too jumped after her. He again reassembled the glass in the window and left with her.  They acted like returned from their work and went to their allotted rooms. 

Soon police arrived and ceased all the activities. All the doctors were arrested and it became a sensational news. All the human bodies were recovered. Sanjeev looked at the police head. He too looked at him once. Sanjeev then left with Durga from the hospital.. No one noticed them. 

They both went to have lunch. Once done return to their room,

Durga- "aduthu enna crime scene ku poga poromaah?"

Sanjeev- "anga ellam night than poganum.."

Durga- "appo ipo enna pana porom.."

Sanjeev twirled her, leaned towards her and mumbled "ena seendiana oruthiya sevaka vaika poren..". in her ears. She felt goosebumps and chilled.

He brushed his body with hers very slowly. 

Durga- "Jeeeeevaaaaa..."., She huskily moaned due to the effect. They looked at each other. He looked at her in the same way as id he started at her in the morning. 

His hands peeked inside her top and rubbed her waist. She struggled to breathe. Her lips parted automatically and her eyes blinked. Sanjeev cupped her face and started to kiss her hungrily. 

She could feel an erection within seconds. Her jeans attempted to help her to hide her wetness below. But his hands travelled down to find it. 

They lost in themselves. Sanjeev hungrily started to eat Durga. The same time her mobile ringed. It disturbed their dream world and they fall in reality. They both parted away and panted heavily. Durga took multiple long breathe to compose herself. Sanjeev Took a minute to compose and checked her mobile. A video call from her family. They again called her. 

Durga enthusiastically attended it. Sanjeev giggled at her. 

Vetrivel- "kuttyma epadi iruka? enna panra?"

Durga- "naan jolly ah iruken pa.. appa, unaku oru visayam theriuma? naan jennal yeri velila kuthichen inaiku"

 Radhika- "ethu? kuthichiah? ethuku kuthicha? avan enna panitu irunthaan appo"

Durga- "Jeeva thaan ena thookivitu help panathu.. enna nadanthathuna.." she started to explain happily with all her cute expression. 

Sanjeev looked at her often via corner of her lips while checking the reports and photos in his mobile. 

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Parvathi Suresh Sharma.