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Kartik and naira are happily married . they had a love marriage . Today is kaira ' s second marriage anniversary .

They celebrate it on a grand way . Kartik give a romantic surprise to naira . Now at midnight they leave from hotel to came back to Goenka villa .

Kaira came out of the hotel . They cross the road suddenly car coming from the opposite side and was about to collide with naira but kartik pull her at the right time .

For a moment naira get scared and kartik also . Kartik pull her in a hug . He start sobbing . Naira feel it .

Kartik ( panicked ) - naira baccha tum theek ho naa tumhe kuch huya nahi hai naa ( broke the hug and start checking her if she got bruises or not ) tumhe kahi lagi toh nahi hai are you fine naa baccha .

Naira tried to calm him down . She cupped her face .

Naira - dekho mujhe kuch nahi huaa hai main bilkul theek hu aur aise baccho ki tarh maat ro warna luv kush tumhe chidhyege yeh keh ki kaise rotlu bhaiya hai hamre .

naira said this to lighten the mood . On heard this kartik chuckled with tears . Kartik again hug her very tightly .

Kartik - jaan agar aaj tumhe kuch ho jaata naa toh main maar jata . Tumhe khote khote baccha hu main .

Naira again hug her tightly and tried to calm him down ..

Naira - shh mendak Rona band karo MENDAK rote huye acche nahi lagte . Aur dekho mujhe kuch nhi huya hai I am perfectly fine .

Naira - acha chalo ab long drive par chalte hai romantic long drive pe .

Naira said and seducively saw toward kartik .

Kartik ( worried ) - nahi naira ab ham seedha ghar jayege .

Naira ( made a sad pout ) - kartik kitne unromantic ho tum .

But kartik was looking tensed and worried . Naira noticed it

Naira ( cupped his face ) - kya huaa mendak itne udaas kyu ho .

Kartik - pata nahi kyu jaan bahaut ajeeb sa lag raha hai aisa lag raha hai kuch hone wala hai . I have a fear of loos..ing you

Naira feel a fear of loosing her in his voice .

Naira ( held his hand ) - shh kuch nahi hoga main tumse dur kahi nahi jayungi ( cupped his chin ) - jab taak ham dono saath hai tab taak kuch nahi hoga hame . Hamara pyar itna kamzor nahi jo hame alag kar de . Aur kya tum itni sundar biwi chod kar aise buri cheezon ke baare main soch rahe ho ..

Naira said trying to lighten his mood and kartik laughed a little .

Naira - accha chalo ab ghar chalte hai aur raat ko aapne room mein ek romantic coffee date karna chahoge .

Kartik smile and nod ..

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AT GOENKA VILLA

Suhasni and swarna was sitting in hall and waiting for kaira .

Suhasni ( worried ) - swarna bacche kab ayege mujhe bahaut tension ho rahi hai .

Swarna - maji tension maat lo bacche aajyege . Aur agar itni fikar ho rahi hai toh ek baar unhe call kar lijiye maji aapki tension Kam.ho jayegi .

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AT CAR

Kartik turned on the music and a jag ghoomeya song play .

Kaira revive all their beautiful memory which they spend with each other .

Kartik ( lip sync on lyrics ) - jag ghoomeya thare jaisa naa koyi

He lovingly look toward him . Naira was blushed . They were too much busy in each other they didn't noticed that the truck coming toward them in full speed .

On the other side suhasni and swarna tried to call kaira but there phone was unreachable .

They again tried to call them and luckily they pick the call . After listening to the person on the other side the phone fell from suhasni 's hand . Tear start falling from her eyes ..

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AT HOSPITAL

Goenkas and singhanias reached hospital . They enquired about kaira . They get to know that some people take them to hospital . Kartik is saved he just got some bruises in his right hand and leg but naira is critical beacuse naira was the one who drive the car .

All went towards kartik . They saw that Kartik is crying inconsolably with hiccups . Manish came start consoling him . He saw his jaan his naira his everything just laid there unconsciously and lifelessly .

Manish and swarna saw helplessly toward Kartik . Just few hours ago everything was fine they were happy and celebrate their happy day but in jiffy their happy day turn into a worst day . Kartik blankly saw toward the operation theatre . Inside naira was struggling between her life and death here outside kartik was also struggling between his life and death . His life is naira and he can't able to saw his naira .

Kartik ( hugging manish ) - papa naira ( cries ) uski jagh mujhe hona chaiye tha agar naira ko kuch ho gaya toh main jee nahi payuga main maar jayunga .

Manish ( himself traumatized ; rubbing his back ) - kuch nahi hoga Naira ko woh bilkul theek ho jaayegi ..

Manish soothing words has no affect on kartik . He couldn't control her break down ..

All look toward Kartik helplessly. He get up and went away toward the family .

Kartik was sitting in the hospital temple . . He start remember naira 's words .

Naira ( held his hand ) - shh kuch nahi hoga main tumse dur kahi nahi jayungi ( cupped his chin ) - jab taak ham dono saath hai tab taak kuch nahi hoga hame . Hamara pyar itna kamzor nahi jo hame alag kar de . Aur kya tum itni sundar biwi chod kar aise buri cheezon ke baare main soch rahe ho .

Kartik ( crying + to himself ) - naira tumne hi toh kaha tha ki hame koyi alag nahi kar sakta Hamara pyar itna kamzor nahi ki hai hame alag kar de phir kyu aise kar rahi ho mujhe kis baat ki saza de rahi ho please aajao naa sherni . Aapne mendak ko yun na tadpao .

Suddenly voice came from behind ..

Voice - main toh tumhare paas hi hu mujhe kya hoga mendak .

Kartik saw naira infront of him . He ho and about to hug her but she stop .

Naira - abhi nahi mendak dekh lena jab main ot se bahar aayungi aur tum aise rote huye mile toh dekhna main tumhara naam totlu mendak goenka rakh dungi ..

Kartik - main rotlu nahi aur mujhe chidhana band karo sherni .

Ward boy - yeh aap kya keh rahe ho sir kon sherni and kon aapko chidha raha hai aap kis se baat kar rahe

Kartik realised that it was his dream and naira was still in an ot .

Kartik start remembering all her moments with naira

Main taan jiya na maraa..
Haaye ve das main ki karaa..

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne..
Baar baar rond akhiyan
Tainu jo na vekh sakiyaan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne..

He start remembering her first meeting .

Bade aaye rafting karne hero baane . Mendak kahi ke taar , taar - taar

Remember her first meet kartik chuckeld with tears .

Katta main ki ve din teri sonh tere bin
Main taan jiya na maraa..
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona

He remember how naira offer him for friendship on friendship day.

Naira - tum mere veeru aur main tumhari jai .

Kartik still hear her voice and the clear picture of that day flash in front of him .

Hai to.. yeh kyon hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak-sisak ke hawayein
Jag soona lage

He remember their proposal , marriage

Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona re..

Soona laage re...

He start remembering the time which they spend together today .

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AFTER SOME HOURS

Kartik was resting on a swarna 's lap . All were waiting impatiently for some update from the doctors . Their hearts are in their mouths , these few hours are seeing like days

Just then the red light above the operation theatre I'd turned off . Kartik and all get alarmed . As the doctor came out kartik went toward him

Kartik ( hopefully ) - kya huaa doctor ?? Meri naira kaisi hai . Woh theek toh hai naa .

Doctor - I am sorry mr goenka but ham aapki wife ko bacha nahi paaye.

The ground slipped under the kartik and all 's feet . They looked at the doctor shocked . Their naira , their jaan of their house is no more they can't believe on their ears . They all still hear naira 's voice . They still thought it is a bad dream and when they wake up naira will be infront of them but alas this is not a dream this was a harsh reality that their naira was no more and kartik was more devastated than other . He was in trauma . They got shocked when they saw that Kartik get faint .

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AT PRIVATE WARD

Kartik ( shout ) - naira ...

Kartik shouted as he get concious . Struggling to stand up tears streaming down his he tried to get up but due to weakness he unable to get up . Manish came .

Manish ( concerned ) - kartik beta kaise ho tum .

Kartik hug him tightly and just crying continuously .

Every memory of their together , from rishikesh , their marriage and just everything came back in front of him .

Manish ( with heavy heart ) - chalo beta aakhri baar naira se mil lo

Kartik ( shout ) - NAHI.....

Kartik get up and ran from hospital. Everyone tried to stop him but he can't stop .

Paas aaye
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile... jaa mile
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein... manzilein

It was the most difficult moment for Kartik . He didn't believe that his naira is no more .

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

He close his house eyes and reminisced his memories with naira .

He curse himself why he and naira went outside . Why he plan a surprise for him ..

Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani

Kartik pov

Nahi reh sakta main tumhare bina aaraha hu main tumhare paas jaan . Hamari kahani adhuri reh gayi naira. Hamari kahani adhuri reh gayi . Abhi mujhe tumhare saath jeena tha hamre bacchon ka papa baana bahaut kuch karna tha . Par alag nahi hona tha . Main nahi ji sakta tumhare bina main aaraha hu tumhare paas . Main aaraha hu .

Pov end

Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani

Kartik was standing beside the Cliff and committed suicide.

Note - aage ke jo scenes aap dekhege woh sab imaginary hai usme se kuch bhi sach nahi hai .

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AT SWARG

Kartik opened his eyes and saw he was on unknown place . He was mesmerized to saw the place . He saw many man and women was hugging each other . He was confused to saw this .

Suddenly an old man came

Old man - aayo baccha tumhara swarg main swagat hai .

Kartik ( confused ) - swarg ??

Old man - haa baccha swarg aur jaha tum iss waqt khade woh swarg ka couple special jagha hai . Aapne aas paas Jo couple tum dekh rahe ho woh sab bichde huye couple hai. Jinka pyar dharti par pura nahi ho paya woh yaha aakar aapna pyar pura kar lete hai .

Kartik can't believe on his ears . He was in heaven . He noticed he doesn't have feets . He turned into a soul . He start finding his naira .

Old man - naira ko dhund rahe ho .

Kartik nod . Old man take him to the naira . He saw that naira was crying continuously .

Naira pov

Kyun ganga maiya kyun mujhe aapne mendak se alag kar diya main yaha nahi aana chahati thi main aapne kartik ke saath jeena chahati thi .

Pov end

Suddenly naira saw kartik . She was shocked to saw him .

Naira pov

Kartik yaha iska matlab woh maar chuka hai woh yaha kya kar raha hai . Woh yaha iska matlab woh maar Gaya . Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta .

Pov end

Naira - kartik tum

Kartik - haa jaan main aagya tumhare paas ab main tumhe kahi bhi chod kar nahi jayunga .

Kartik hug her and said - ab hame koyi alag nahi kar payega . Koyi bhi nahi we will be together forever .

Naira - par kartik kyu kiya tumne Aisa.

Kartik - bhagwan ne hame alag kiya woh unki marzi thi aur yeh rasta chunna meri marzi . I can't live without you isliye main yaa agayi . WE ARE INSEPARABLE . hame koyi alag nahi kar sakta .

Naira just hug him and start crying . They were in each other embrace for the long time ..

Suddenly they heard an announcement .

Announcement - ns - 3001 come in the chamber .

Naira ( broke the hug ) - ham yaha nahi reh sakte mujhe jaana hoga . Mujhe aagla janam mil gaya iss janam mein main bahaut kam jee hu isliye mujhe agla janam mil gaya .

Dekho tum mujhe pichle janam main sherni bulate the isliye god ne mujhe agale janam main sherni banaya hai .

Kartik nod in no

Kartik - nahi jaan abhi ham mile hai aur ab tum dubara earth par jaarahi ho .

Naira - don't worry kuch dino baad tum bhi dharti paar aajana mendak banke phir ham aapni love story phir se start karege .

Final announcement - ns - 3001 came in chamber right now .

Naira - kartik mujhe jaana hoga .

I love you milte hai aagle janam main .

Kartik - I love you 2 . Milte hai agle janam main sherni

Naira - mendak .

And they join their forehead and feel the moment .

After that naira went inside the chamber and take a rebirth on earth as a sherni and 2 days later kartik also take birth on earth as a mendak .

THE END

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