Unhappy With The Track..... So Os On The Track I Wanted
Heyy guys I am very upset with the current track of yrkkh Hai so I am writing an os on the track how I wanted it to be.... So this was the surprise I mentioned in comment to a few of you........
So the tracks starts from where Kartik says to naira to never show her face again......
kartik (angry) - chali Jao naira mujhe tumhari yeh Shakal vaapas kabhi Nahi dekhni..... Chali Jao yahan se.....
Naira (angry) - theek Hai Kartik chali jaungi main..... Hamesha ke liye chali jaungi but ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo..... Ek baar chali gayi na toh main vaapas kabhi Nahi aaungi..... Kabhi bhi Nahi aaungi...
Saying this naira went from there angrily......
Naira (to herself) - samajhta kya hai yeh Kartik khudko..... Pehle toh bada bolta tha ki Bina Bole he tumhari Har baat samajh jaunga Aur ab kya hua..... Theek Hai Koi baat Nahi..... Tum yahi chaahte ho na Kartik.... Toh main ab yahi karungi..... Hamesha ke liye chali jaungi..... Hamesha ke liye....
Saying this she wiped her tears and went along with keerti.....saying that her mayka needs her more right now......
On the other hand Kartik is breaking everything in his room.....
Kartik (shouting +angry) - kyun kiya tumne aisa naira kyun.... Dono bhai behan ne mujhe, meri behan Aur Hamari poori family ko dhoka diya Hai....... Kyun naira kyunnn......nahi batana tha toh naa batati but jab mujhe Pata chal gaya toh mujhe room main band Kar diya..... Kyun naira kyun..... Taaki main tumhare dhokebaaz bhai ka Sach saamne na Laa sakun...... Iss baat ke liye toh main kabhi tumhe maaf Nahi karunga.... Kabhi Nahi.....
Dadi heard everything....
Dadi (to herself) - heyy bhagwaan yeh humne kya Kar diya.... Beti ka Ghar basaane ke chakkar main.... Humne kittu Aur naira ko alag Kar diya.... Hume maaf Kar dijiye bhagwaan and kittu and naira ke beech ki saari dooriyon ko mita dijiye......
In singhania house in keesh's room....
Naksh - keerti ji main aapko kuch batana chaahta hoon.... Main jaanta hoon ki aap yeh sunkar thoda hurt hongi but main aapko dhoke main Nahi rakhna chahta keerti ji isliye reception se pehle pehle aapko sab kuch Sach bata dena chaahta hoon.....
Keerti - boliye naksh..... Aap mujhse kuch bhi keh sakte Hai....
Naksh - keerti ji Maine yeh shaadi ki manzoori pehle siraf Aur siraf naira ki khushiyon ke liye ki thi but keerti ji now I really love you..... I really love you alot..... I know aap abhi mujhse nafrat karna chaah Rahi hogi keerti ji.... But Sach ab yahi hai ki now I really love you..... Plzz mujhe chod Kar mat jaaiyega keerti ji plzz...
Keerti - naksh aap bahut ache Hai..... Thank you soo much aapne mujhe yeh sab pehle se he bata diya..... And I trust you naksh..... And ab yeh baat Koi maayne Nahi rakhti ki aapne shaadi ke liye Haan kyun ki thi.... But maayne yeh rakhti Hai ki ab aap mujhse pyaar karte Hain.....
Naksh - thank you soo much keerti ji mujhe samajhne ke liye....
They both hug each other.....
On the other hand naira is having tears remembering her marriage days.....
Naira - jhoot tha na yeh sab Kartik.... Jo promises tumne mujhe diye the...SAB jhoot the na..... Kya ab tumhe mujhpar itna bhi vishvaas Nahi raha ki kamse Kam 2 minute ruk Kar meri baat he sun lete..... I know keerti bhabi tumhare liye bahut important Hai.... Aur honi bhi chahiye.... But iska yeh Matlab toh Nahi na ki tum mere saath saare relations he bhool Jao....
Naira's Nani heard everything.....
Nani - bitiya raani....
Naira (wiping tears) - are Nani aap....
Nani - yeh sab kya hai bitiya raani tum apna Ghar chod Kar aayi ho.... Par....
Naira - Nani yeh bhi toh Mera he Ghar Hai.... And main yahan bhi kabhi bhi aa sakti hoon na.... Vaise bhi abhi ladke vaalon ki taraf se Maine achi tarah se maze Nahi liye.... Isliye aap yeh sab chodiye and chaliye hum sab reception ki taiyaari karte Hain....
She then hugged her Nani and went out.....
Nani - heyy baal gopal.... Mere dono bachon ki jodi ko banaye rakhna....
Now it's time for reception and all are waiting for goenka family to come.....
Everyone comes except for Kartik.....
Naira tries to search for him but was not able to see him.....she then sees keesh holding each other's hand and smiles thinking that naksh was right now he truly loves keerti...... Then Kartik's dadi came..... She touched her feet.....
Dadi (after blessing her) - naira dekho hum kisi cheez ke liye tumhe force Nahi karenge..... Hum bass yahi kehna chaahte Hain ki beta ab keerti bhi Ghar se chali gayi Hai..... Aur tum bhi Nahi ho toh Ghar bilkul soona soona lagta Hai.... Kartik bhi tumhe bahut yaad Karta Hai beta.....
Naira - dadi Agar voh yaad Karta toh reception main aa jaata.... Lekin voh toh..... Anyways dadi chaliye na dance karte Hain......
Then everyone danced and keesh were also very happy......
Now the reception got over...and Kartik didn't attend it....
Kartik - aisi jagah bilkul Nahi jaunga jahan sabne meri behan ko Dhoka diya Hai.......
On the other side.....
Naira (to herself) - kyun Kartik kyun itna immature act Kar Rahe ho..... Aisa Nahi lag raha ki tum mere vaale Kartik ho.... Mera pyaar..... Jisko main Agar kuch na bhi kahun phir bhi voh samajh jaata tha.... Phir ab kyun aise act Kar Rahe ho.... Jaante Nahi kya tum bhai yaan mujhe.....
Dadi (to herself) - Hume kuch bhi karke kittu Aur naira ko milaana he Hoga..... Hume Pata Hai aise haalat main Kartik kuch bhi Nahi samajhta.... But naira voh toh samajhdaar Hai..... Main usse he jaakar bolti hoon....
Dadi - naira...
Naira - ji dadi....
Dadi - naira Kal Diwali Hai..... And tumhare Aur Kartik ki shaadi ke baad ki pehli Diwali Hai yeh..... Tum Ghar aaogi na...??.... Dekho beta kittu ke liye naa sahi kamse Kam hamare Aur baaki Ghar vaalon ke liye toh aa Jao..... Hum tumhe force Nahi Kar sakte beta..... But request toh Kar he sakte Hai na hum......
Saying this dadi left....
Naira - mere Aur Kartik ki shaadi ke baad pehli Diwali....
She then recalls her last Diwali when Kartik and naira were first United....
A tear escapes her eyes....
But she then immediately wipes it....
Now it is Diwali.....
Dadi - kittu beta.... Jao Aur jaakar naira ko vaapas le aao....
Kartik - dadi Jisko aana Hoga voh aa jaayega and Jisko Nahi aana.... Voh uski marzi.....
Dadi - kittu par...
Kartik - plzz Dadi iss baare main Aur baat Nahi karte.....
Suddenly they hear cars sound and they turn and see naira coming in....
Everyone become very happy.... Even Kartik us happy but you all know him now a days he is acting too immature...(though isme uski galti Kam but writers ki zyaada Hai.... Voh toh Apni acting bahut achi Kar raha Hai....do you all agree??)
Dadi (very happy) - Hume Pata tha naira tum Hamari baat ka maan zaroor rakhogi....
Naira - dadi yeh Mera bhi toh Ghar Hai..... (while seeing Kartik now) and mujhe iss Ghar main aane ke liye kisi ki permission ki zaroorat Nahi Hai....
Dadi - bilkul sahi kaha tumne naira....chalo ab hum sab Pooja start karte Hain varna muhoorat Chala jaayega....
All agree including Kartik and they all do Pooja.....
At night.....
Naira - luv kush aaj bhabi aapke saath soyegi theek Hai...!!
Luv - kush - yayyyyyy bhabi you are the besttttttttttttttttttttttttt.....
Kartik(to himself) - abhi bhi avoid Kar Rahi ho mujhe.... Yeh Nahi ki aakar sorry bol do.....
Naira (to herself) - sorry tab bolte Hain jab kisi ne Koi galti ki ho.... But jab galti he Nahi ki Hai toh sorry kis baat ke liye bolun......
Now it is morning and it is bhai dooj today....
Keesh are coming to goenka house....
Kartik (to himself) - aaj jab voh dhookebaaz naksh mere saamne aayega toh main kaise control Kar paunga apne aap ko.... Meri behan ko Dhoka Dene ki uski himmat kaise hui....
Naira (to herself) - agar aaj tumne kuch ulta seedha kaha na bhai ko Kartik.... Toh jitna gussa main abhi hoon usse bhi bahut zyaada gussa ho jaungi....
Now keesh come.....
Kartik closes his wrist tightly in order to control his anger seeing naksh....
Now they do bhai dooj Pooja and both keerti and naira applies tikka to their respective brothers......
Now in front of everyone keerti was walking and due to high heels she was about to fall but naksh held her......And then he made her stand straight.....
Naksh(worried) - keerti ji aapko kahin Lagi toh Nahi.... Aapko Maine pehle bhi mana kiya tha heels pehne ke liye lekin phir bhi aapne heels pehan li.....
Kartik (shouting) - kiske saamne naatak Kar Rahe ho naksh..... Tumhari saari sachai Pata hai mujhe toh zyaada innocent baanne ki koshish na he Karo toh behtar Hai.....yeh care vagerah Karne ki acting tumpar suit Nahi hoti.....
Everyone shockingly look at Kartik...
Kartik - Haan.... Aap sab ne sahi Suna.... Yeh naksh Koi pyaar vyaar Nahi Karta meri behan Se balki usne compromise marriage ki Hai keerti ke saath..... Sauda Hai uske liye yeh sab...... Naksh and naira ne milkar Hume Dhoka diya Hai......jaise he mujhe sachai Pata chali main shaadi rokne ke liye bhaaga but naira ne mujhe room main lock Kar diya Aur.....
Before Kartik could say anything more dadi interrupted....
Dadi (shouting) - lock tumhe naira ne Nahi humne kiya tha kittu kyunki hum yeh shaadi rokna Nahi chahte the......
Kartik got shocked...
Keerti - Aur Kartik Rahi baat yeh ki...... naksh mujhse pyaar Nahi karte the...... Toh yeh baat voh mujhe already reception se pehle he bata chuke the..... Voh pehle mujhse pyaar Nahi karte the..... But ab voh mujhse bahut pyaar Karte Hain ...... And tum he ne toh kaha tha na ki actions speaks louder than the words..... Toh ab tumhe Nahi dikh raha ki naksh meri kitni care Kar Rahe Hain.....
Kartik got more shocked and was now very guilty....
Naksh - ab samjh main Aaya mujhe ki naira itni udaas kyun thi..... Tum kehte ho ki Maine tumhari behan ke saath galat kiya but tum khud apne aap ko dekho kya tumne meri behan ke saath bahut acha kiya??? Naira ko toh yeh Sach var maala ke 2 minute pehle Pata chala tha..... And usne mujhe alag le jaakar poocha bhi tha.... Apni kasam khilvaai thi ki main keerti ji se pyaar Karta hoon and unhe Hamesha khush rakhunga and Kartik yeh baat tum toh kya sab bahut ache se jaante Hai ki main Apni behan ki jhooti kasam kabhi nahi khaunga.... Kabhi bhi Nahi......
Everyone agree to naksh and Kartik is now very very guilty.... He sees towards naira with guilty eyes but naira starts seeing in some other direction.....
Naksh - chal naira tu yahan Nahi rukegi ab.....
Naira - Nahi bhai main yahin rukungi kyunki yeh Mera bhi Ghar Hai....
Kartik though that naira forgave him (abhi sorry tak toh Bola Nahi Hai 😂😂)
Keesh agree and leave.....
Naira also goes to her room....
Kartik follows her....
Kartik (he turns her towards him) - thank you soo much naira.... Tumne mujhe maaf Kar diya....
Naira - whattttttt?? Tumhe lagta hai ki Maine tumhe maaf Kar diya?? Abhi sorry toh tumne Bola Nahi Hai and Maine maaf Kar diya.... Wow..... Ab yeh haq bhi tumhara he Hai na ki tum mujhse zabardasti maafi grant Kar lo.......
Kartik - Nahi naira aisa Nahi Hai..... I am really very sorry.....
Naira - are main toh bhool he gayi thank you soo much Hamari shaadi ki pehli teej and Diwali ko itna memorable banane ke liye..... Main isse kabhi Nahi bhoolungi.....
She actually meant those words.... Yeah she said it sarcastically but she was very hurt right now....
Whereas Kartik was very very guilty....
Kartik - Maine Kitna galat kiya naira Aur naksh ke saath mujhe bahut bura lag raha Hai ab....
Kartik decided to apologize to naksh too.... So he went to singhania sadan and saw keerti and naksh laughing....
As he headed further keesh stopped laughing and looked at him....
Kartik (lower head) - naksh I am very sorry.... Maine tumhe itna hurt kiya.... I know mujhe aisa Nahi karna chahiye tha but uss waqt mujhe Aur kuch samjh he Nahi Aaya.... Naksh I am really very sorry....
Naksh (keeping his hand on Kartik's shoulder) - Kartik.... It's OK and in fact..... Main tumhari situation ache se samjh sakta hoon....main bhi ek bhai hoon Kartik and Agar kabhi meri behan ke saath aisa kuch hota toh main aasaani se maaf Nahi Kar paata... Mujhe bura bas iss baat ka laga tha ki iss sab chakkar main naira bahut hurt hui....
Kartik - jaanta hoon main naksh.... Usse manane ki bhi koshish ki but....
Naksh - Kartik yeh mat bhoolo ki voh naira Hai sabse unique and sabse alag.... Isliye jo bhi Karo soch samjh Kar he karna....
Kartik - thank you soo much naksh mujhe samjh ne ke liye....
Then they both hugged each other....
Now it is night and Kartik goes to his room and sees naira putting a pillow and blanket on the couch....
Kartik - naira plzz aise mat Karo....i am really very sorry...... Agar tum aise couch main soogi toh tum gir sakti hoand tumhe chot lag sakti Hai and....
Naira - ohh hello tumhe kisne kaha ki yeh couch par main blanket and pillow apne liye set Kar Rahi thi..... Yeh tumhare liye hai.... Couch par main Nahi tum sooge...
(Ik it is 😂)
Kartik - kyaa??..
Naira - Haan.... Good night Mr. Trust na Karne vaale....
She then slept.... Actually acted to be sleeping....
Kartik - good night my angry bird....
Before Kartik could ever sit on the couch.....
Naira - ohh hello yeh angry bird kisse kaha tumne??....galti tum karte ho Aur upar se bhaav bhi khaate ho.... Bade aaye mendhak kahin ke....
Kartik - acha ji abhi tak toh tumhe badi neend aa Rahi thi.... Aur ab kya hua....
Naira - Haan right.... Main kyun tum Jaise mendhak ki tar tar main shaamil hoon..... You plzz continue with your tar tar...
She put blanket upto her face....
Whereas Kartik laughed....
Kartik - meri Sherni bhi na....
He then slept on the couch.....
All the elders discussed something and they too slept....
In the morning Kartik woke up first and saw naira sleeping peacefully.... He went near her.... And kissed her forehead.....
Kartik - I am sorry naira Maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya Hai na..... Hamari pehli teej and Diwali bhi khaaraab Kar di na Maine.... But trust me main bilkul bhi hosh main Nahi tha..... Pata Nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe jo main itna immature act Karne laga tha.... I am really very sorry my Sherni.....
He then again cupped her face and kissed her forehead......
He went to the washroom and took a bath and in the mean time even naira woke up.....
She touched her forehead as she felt her mendhak's touch over there......
Kartik came out and then even naira got ready.....
Both went down.... (not together)
Dadi - kittu, naira... Idhar aao bachon....
Kaira - ji dadi....
Dadi - bachon Hume abhi abhi yaad Aaya ki tum dono ka honeymoon toh hua he Nahi.... Isliye....
Naira - dadi shaadi ke 6 mahine baad honeymoon...??
Kartik - Haan toh honeymoon toh honeymoon hota hai chaahe shaadi ke 6 mahine baad ho yaar 6 din baad....
Naira - tum toh Apni tar tar bandh he rakho.....
Kartik - acha ji toh tum bhi roar karna band Karo.....
Dadi - are bachon.... Bas bhi Karo ab aaj shyaam ki flight Hai tum dono ki and tum dono jaa Rahe ho bass....
Naira - dadi par.....
Kartik - are dadi ne keh diya na bass toh bass..... Main toh bhai jaa raha hoon packing Karne..... Byee Byee....
Naira - are??!
Dadi - vaise bachon tum dono Greece jaa Rahe ho.... Vaise bhi tum dono ka visa toh laga he hua Hai....
Naira - OK dadi....
In Kaira room..... Kartik is dancing like a mad person.....
Kartik - yes yes yes.... Naira ko manane ki golden opportunity Hai yeh.... Isse kaise haath se jaane Doon.......
After sometime naira also came and did the packing.....
Kartik(teasingly)- I just can't wait for our honeymoon....
Naira gave angry glare to him and then spoke sarcastically...
Naira (sarcastically) - trust toh hota Nahi Hai logon ko.... Bade aaye honeymoon manane.....
Kartik - Haan and kuch log bhi Kitna bhaav khaate Hain.....koi banda bechaara tabse sorry bol raha Hai yeh Nahi ki usse maaf Kar den.....
Naira - Haan pehle chaahe jitna Dil dukhaana Hai dukhaaye.... And then aakar aaraam se sorry bol de..... Bahut Aasaan hota hai na.....
Kartik held naira's shoulder and turned her towards him..... And the atmosphere became very intense....
Kartik (In a very serious tone) - Nahi naira..... Galti karna Aasaan hota Hoga but galti ko accept karna.... Trust me bilkul bhi aasaan Nahi hota hai.....
Naira just kept looking at him and they both shared a very cute or should I say intense eyelock.....
Dadi - bachon taxi aa gayi Hai.....
Both composed themselves and went down......
Now they are in the flight and naira is completely avoiding Kartik......
Suddenly Kartik got an idea..... And he acted as if he was in pain......
Kartik - aaah.... Mera haath.....
Naira (panicked) - Kartik kya hua tumhare haath ko..... Tum theek toh ho na.....
Kartik - aah bahut bahut zyaada Dard ho raha Hai mere iss haath main.....
Before he was holding his left hand and now he was holding his right hand...... Naira understood his plan and got angry......
Naira (angry) - samajhte kya ho tum khud ko..... Sab samjh main Aata Hai mujhe..... Naatak Kar Rahe ho na..... Kyun ...... Mujhe Heart attack divaana ke liye......
Kartik (keeping his finger on her lips) - plzz aise mat Kaho naira.....
Naira bit his finger being a Sherni.....
Kartik - ouch.....
She then tightly hugged him......and started crying.....
Naira (crying) - tum bahut Bure ho Kartik..... Pehle kuch bhi bolte ho.... Gussa karte ho..... And then puppy face banakar mere saamne aa jaate ho.....
Even Kartik hugged her very tight....
Kartik (crying) - I am sorry naira..... I know Maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya Hai..... But uss waqt bass mere Mann main yahi chal raha tha ki meri already chot khaayi hui behan ko Aur dukh na pahunche........ I am really very sorry for being so immature......
They broke the hug.......and wiped each others tears.......
Naira - I am sorry too Kartik.....kuch samay ke liye bass yahi soch Rahi thi ki mere Kartik ne mujhe dukh diya..... But yeh bhool gayi thi ki voh Kartik siraf Mera Kartik Nahi Hai voh kissi ka bhai bhi Hai....agar mere bhai hote tumhari jagah toh voh bhi aise he react karte......
Kartik - Nahi naira I am sorry..... Tumhara Kartik siraf tumhara he Hai and tum meri Sherni siraf meri Sherni..... Inn family ke chakkaron main hum yeh toh bhool he Gaye ki Hamari personal bhi Koi life Hai..... I am sorry Maine kuch waqt ke liye tumse tumhara yeh haq cheen Liya tha.......
Naira - Nahi Kartik it's OK....... And I am also sorry.....
Kartik - Nahi naira..... Chalo ab ek doosre ko sorry bolna band karte Hain and apne honeymoon ka maza uthaate Hain.....
Naira nodded and they again hugged each other very tight....
They enjoyed their honeymoon very much and clicked many pictures and all the elders were very happy seeing them patch up
The end
Guys 3352 words!!! My longest update till now actually not update but Os...... I first thought of publishing this Os as an other book but then I thought ki kya zaroorat Hai.... Hehehe..... Guys plzz tell me how is it...... Each and everyone reading this plzz comment and vote.... I need 60 + + + votes and 50 ++ comments (without including mine 😉) ........ Guys I really wish aisa kuch hota show main bhi..... I really wanted naira to get angry and then Kartik usko manaay..... Like she had to struggle for Kartik's forgiveness in Switzerland vaise he I wanted Kartik to struggle for naira's forgiveness....... What say guys...!!??....
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Love you all
Shreya
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