AN: No Prof read kindly adjust.. Please spare a minute and read the below.. I need your support

I got a comment from my reader, follower as well as my well wisher, which says that she can't able to see kavin in Vihaan's role since Kavin and Ashwin are of same age and can't able to imagine senior to Ashwin. While reading and conveying the emotions, it if not fitting in the role.. Kavin seems to be fit as Ashwin's best friend and not able imaging him as the elder brother is the comment i got in short.

If anyone who has the same comment or feel like that, feel free to accept. Now, please tell me who fits Vihaan role, who can suit to be Karnan the great warrior and especially as Ashwin's brother as best?? There is also options to choose, based on the count i will fix the role.. 

Please give honest comment and choose the person. Will do my best to continue the play. 

Prithviraj Sugumaran as Vihaan (Karnan)

Santhosh prathap  as Vihaan (Karnan)

unni mukundan  as Vihaan (Karnan)

Kavin  as Vihaan (Karnan), For those who didn't have the mind to change since it crossed 33 chapters. 

Please comment and tell me who fits the role perfectly. Also if anyone feels like didn't wish to change Kavin, comment the same. 

Feel free to comment so that if needed i will change and continue... Suggestions are always welcomed. 

And as i always say, you can imagine whoever you wish to have in any of the characters in this book. I often put my characters photos, just to make you sync with the flow and to make you all come out from the Mahabharatham serial characters. Thats all. Kindly help me finalize.

Lets get into the story.. 

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After having dinner, all four started to pack their things for the travel. Vihaan informed Madhav about the time regarding their start. All entered the car. 

Vihaan sat in the driver seat and Ashwin sat next to him. Sujithra and Dharshini sat in the back seat. Arjun switched on the music player and the drive started peacefully. Sujithra felt sleepy and tried to lean on the window to sleep comfortably. She could find a comfortable position and so she kept changing the position. 

Dharshini- " akka akka nu koopdurathu ellam summa varthaiku thana, suji?"

Sujithra -" enna aachu akka? yaen ipadi kekureenga?", she looked at her with confusion.

Dharshini-  " en madila paduthukanumnu unaku thonalaya? ithuve avara iruntha nee madila paduthurupalla ipadi seat la kastapattu thirumbi thirumbi padukama?". 

Vihaan and Arjun silently listened. 

Sujithra- " Akka apadi ellam illa. ungaluku kaal valikumae nu thaan naan varala"

Dharshini-' Enaku mattum than kaal valikuma? un amma, anna ku ellam valikatha?"

Sujithra smiled and said, " illa akka avangaluku valikathu. Girls ku thaan valikum, boys ku valikaathu.. "

Dharshini looked at her with confusion and asked, " ithu enna puthu concept? yaar sonna ipadi unaku?"

Sujithra- " amma sonanga. Amma madila sila samayam thoonginappo, amma kaal valikuthu nu elupi vitruvanga. oru naal sandai vanthiduchu enakum ammakum appo than amma sonanga, boys strong ah irukurathala kaal vali ellam varathu. aana girls soft ah irukuratha valikumam. athula irunthu naan amma madila padukurathu illa. epavum anna, mama thaan. "

Dharshini- " apadi ellam kidaiyathu, avanga aged la athunala valichurukum. nee madila paduthuko"

Sujithra- " appo enaku sisters illanrathala yemathitangala akka!!", she told with a shocked expression. "irukum, irukum.. en amma intha velai ellam papanga. sariana KD avanga"

Vihaan and Arjun chuckled silently. 

Dharshini- " sari sari, vaa paduthuko..".

Sujithra- "sari akka, aana valicha solidunga. valiya poruthuka koodathu. "

Dharshini- "athellam valikathu padu.."

Sujithra lied on her lap comfortably and Dharshini started to pat her automatically. 

Sujithra- "akka marupadium solren, valicha solidunga"

Dharshini- " poo mathiri iruka nee. kutty papa madila padutha mathiri thaan iruku enaku. unna papa nu avar sariah than koopduraru."

Sujithra- " naan onum kutty papa illaka. enaku kalyaname agiduchu", She whined. 

Dharshini  and Vihaan giggled while Arjun turned towards the window side and smiled. To him she is not a Kid. He is unable to see her like that. She is his wife, his girl. Moreover, he is fully occupied with desire filled ideas recently. 

Sujithra slept within minutes and Dharshini too leaned back, closed her eyes to sleep. Vihaan and Arjun concentrated on the path.  Everything goes fine until midnight. After it crossed 1 am, A and Z followed them as a black smoke. 

On their path, a lorry on the opposite side.  Z flew to the lorry and waited for the right time. When a turning came, Z blurred his vision and blocked with the black smoke. The driver confused and missed his control all of a sudden. The lorry started to move here and there. 

Vihaan and Arjun noticed the lorry is coming without control with much speed. Vihaan panicked for a second but soon focused the lorry and tightly clutched the gear. He is making himself ready. Arjun too got panicked for a moment and then started to observe the sideways of their path. 

Vihaan- " Ajju right side evlo space iruku, minute detailed ah sollu"

Arjun peeked outside and said, " anna right side la 5 feet space iruku. konja thoorathula turning varuthu, speed increase panna risk edukanum. "

Vihaan moved to the car to the right side and asked, " ippo evlo iruku?"

Arjun - " 3 feet anna". 

Vihaan increased his speed a lot and said, " Ajju get in"., Arjun got inside the next second. Vihaan drove the car in utmost right side in the turning and missed the target. 

Lorry and Car was about to crash but with very minute millimeter distance, the car passed the lorry. Once it passed, the car need to turn immediately due to the increased speed successfully. 

A- " Adangappa, athu epadi intha chinna gap ah vachu thapichanga? konjam ... konjam miss agiruntha kandipa accident thaan. athuvum intha konja nerathula, udane mudivu eduthuku, speed ah ooti.. epadi thapichan?", He exclaimed as well as irritated.

Z- " atha ooturathu Karnan da, maranthutiah?"

A- " irunthutu pogatum, adutha lorry varuthulla atha vachu accident panidalam"

Z- " vendam, ini ethavathu panna Karnan avana pathi unara arambichuduvaan. athu namaku thaan aabathu, Guru namala thituvaru... ippo Kilambalam vaa. Namma kuri Karnan illa, Arjunan thaan. Vera vali yosikalam."

Vihaan calculated every minute detail intelligently and handled the situation. It appeared like he did it as if he is experienced in it. Even he felt a difference in him. He felt his inner talent now. Vihaan stopped the car after the turning in the normal road path. Dharshini and Sujithra got up due to the sudden break. 

Vihaan and Arjun left out a long breathe. A and Z went to their place without disturbing them. 

Dharshini- " enna aachu?"

Arjun- " kuruka naai podichu anni. avlo thaan".

Dharshini- " Oh, paathu ootunga. ". Vihaan and Arjun looked at each other once and then Vihaan nodded at her. 

Vihaan felt something is provoked in him. He leaned on the seat and closed his eyes. Arjun placed his hand on Vihaan shoulder. He pressed a little. 

Arjun- " anna naan ooturen". Vihaan nodded and they exchanged their places and Arjun started to drive. 

Vihaan- " Ajju,paathu drive pannu"

Arjun- " okay anna. but inthe trick ah enaku apurama solli thaa anna. intha performance ellam naan cinema la kooda pathathu illa"

Vihaan smiled a little. 

Sujithra- " ethayavathu kathukurathuku munnadi oru thadava yosi aththaan. nee kathukura ellathulaium, mama kooda potti podanum.. yaar kanda, solli koduthathuku apuram unna car otta vittu kuruka naai ah vitatalum vitruvaru mama"

Arjun widened his eyes and shocked to the core. Since he only knows what happened just now. He imagined like recreating the same by Vihaan. 

Vihaan laughed since he understood Arjun's thought by his look itself. Arjun pouted and looked at him. 

Vihaan- " un mind voice ah catch paniten. kavalapadatha, intha test vaika maten"

Arjun- " anna", he whined.

Dharshini and Sujithra giggled, thinking that the test he mentioned is about the dog. Then they travelled peacefully and reached home in the early morning. Vihaan dropped Dharshini in her home and then drove to their home. 

As usual, once they entered Arjun and Sujithra entered their room and started to sleep. Vihaan had a little talk with the parents and went to his room to sleep. 

The next day, everyone did their chores and then completely involved in the marriage discussion. Even Devi and Preetha also there.

Rajan- "Suji ma, konjam inga vaa ma"

Sujithra- " enna thatha?"

Rajan - " rendu naalla Krishnar rukmani kalyanam varuthulla. koyilla thirukalyanam nadakkum pothu, koyil mandapathula namalum kalyana vaibavam vaikalam. nee than nadathanum."

Sujithra- " nana?", She asked him with a shock. 

Devi- " vera yaram. ipadi panna una mangalya palam koodum. intha vaibavathula antha kadavul manasu niraichu theerga sumangaliah irunu arul seivarunu nambikkai iruku.. Nee pannu"

Sujithra looked at Arjun once. Arjun blinked his eyes. Sujithra then nodded her head. 

Preetha -" Romba gavanama pannanum da kannu. itha sariah pannita un kalyana valkai seerum sirappuma nalla irukum, theerga sumangaliah irupa nee. Neeum aththaanum santhosama irukalam"

Devi- " ithuku munnadi Rukmani kalyanam nadakura nerathula, kastapadura yelai kudumbathu ponnuku kalyanam panni vachu, avangala Krishnaravum, Rukmaniyavum ninaichu aseervatham vanguvom. Aana ippo apadi ellam enga panna mudiuthu, rendu bommaiku than kalyanam panni vaika mudiuthu."

Rohit- " kadaisi nerathula ethavathu sollitu irukatha devi. neenga rendu perum kavalapadureenganu thaan ipo Suji itha panna pora. Kadavul namma pakura parvai la thaan irukurar. anthagalathula manishanukulla patha kadavula thaan ipo nee kallula pathukitu iruka"

Devi- " enna neenga Madhav maari pesa arambichuteenga"

Pandiyan- " pinna enna ma. Suji kutty ku kalyanam aagi 12 naal than agirukum. ava chinna ponnu. ithuve avaluku peria visayam. Arjun-um ivalum sernthu rendu naal la ella velaium pananum"

 Madhav - " avanga thaniah nadathanum nu illaye naanga irukom"

Preetha- " neengala?"

Vihaan- " Amam ma. purushan pondatti thaniah ella arrangements um pananum nu illa. Neenga ethir paatha padi, kalyanatha avanga nadathi vaipanga. arrangements ah kooda irunthu naanga panrom. "

Madhav- " Kalyanam na summava? evlo velai irukum? Arjun epadi thaniah papaan? athoda, Arjun kum Vihu kalyana velaiah pakanumnu asai irukaatha?? ipo itha paka sonna avan epadi?? unga bayatha pokurathuku avangala ethuku paduthareenga?"

Devi- " dei, avangalae summa irukanga daa. nee yaen kilapi vidura?"

Rajan - " Madhav solrathu sari thaan. Kalyana yerpada Vihaan-um Madhav-um sernthu panatum.", he then turned towards them and said, " Kalyanam sirappa nadakkum. Chumma rendu bommai ku nadakuratha nianika koodathu. Kadavulukae kalyanam panratha ninaikalainalum parava illaya, oru ponnukum paiyanukum kalyanam nadaka poratha ninaichu niraiva pannanum.  Arjun-kum Suji-kum intha vaibavam mukiamam, manamakkal aseervatham mukiam. Peria manamedaiah vachu konjam grand ah panna muyarchi pannunga. Namma veetu kalyanam pola nadakkanum . Ponnu veedum naama than, Mapla veedum naama thaan. "

Arjun and Sujithra nodded their head with much thoughts. Vihaan and Madhav furrowed their eyebrows and looked at each other. The last statement ringed in their head. 'Namma veetu kalyanam pola nadakkanum.. Ponnu veedum naama than, Mapla veedum naama thaan.'

They all then dispersed. Arjun, Vihaan, Madhav then discussed a lot and prepared a list. Sujithra was given a list of things to perform. The trio men went out to give all orders and for further arrangements. Everything went in a full swing. Unexpectedly, Amazingly all the orders were accepted and they can now perform it in a expected way. 

At night, In Arjun's room, 

Arjun- " Jiira kutty, naan poi Maddy kita pesitu varen"

Sujithra- " ivlo neram onna thane suthineenga, pathalaya? inum enna pesanum?"

Arjun- " avanuku konja nerathuku munnadi oru message vanthathu jiira kutty. athula irunthe avan sari illa"

Sujithra- " sari illana? epadi solra aththaan"

Arjun- " thideernu santhosam agitaan, apuram romba yosanaila irukaan. oru mathiri vithayasama irukaan. athaan poi pesitu vantharen"

Sujithra- " kalaila pesiakalam la?"

Arjun- ' nalaiku kalaila semma velai iruku. ellathaium nerla poi pakanum. ella velaium sariah nadakuthanu pakanum. JIira kutty 10 mins ma, poi pesitu vantharen"

Sujithra nodded with a yarn and said, " seekram vaa aththaan"

In Vihaan's room, Dharshini called Vihaan.

Vihaan- " sollu Shalu, ipo thaan vanthaen athaan ivlo neram call panala.."

Dharshini- " enanga oru mukiamana visayam. Aishwarya va house arrest panni vachirukanga.. athu mattum illa ragasiyama avaluku kalyana yerpadu vera panirukangalam.."

Vihaan stood up in shock at the same time, Arjun entered Madhav room and looked at Madhav who is smiling looking at the ceiling. 

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Parvathi Suresh Sharma.