The Shadow Cast Over Me
By ttoteatspie
Title: For being a werewolf story, this is an original title. I like it, it's mysterious and not too revealing.
Cover: I think it's appropriate, I love the manipulation and the title placement, but the author name could use a different font.
Blurb: I'm curious. I mean, it's not like the usual blurb and it's pretty mysterious. Some readers find the use of first person in blurbs upsetting; I, however, like it.
Plot: For now, I've read from the prologue up to chapter 6. The prologue is really short but filled with suspense. The story looks like it starts slow, but there's already a lot of backstory on the main character. She interacts with a lot of characters, which makes the storyline more intricate. Some passages were a little rushed, you could add some more details such as descriptions, especially of feelings and thoughts.
Grammar: While the plot is quite strong, your grammar could use some improvement. You tend to misuse commas and genitives; also, some words were incorrectly spelled. However, that's nothing that can't be fixed without editing.
Overall rate: 7.5/10
Would I recommend reading this book?: I'd recommend this book if you are into werewolf stories.
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