By jgrace2197

Title: Beautiful title, perfect for a fantasy story

Cover: I also love the cover, it gives me a magical vibe

Blurb: I love that you try to hook readers with it. It's detailed, but not too revealing (which may be an issue for longer blurbs). I like that you introduce the main character straight away.

Plot: So far, I've read the prologue and the first part of Chapter 1. I love that you're giving deep backstory in the prologue; I expected these chapters to be riddled with rich descriptions but I was surprised that you focused more on narration, dialogues and backstory. That doesn't mean that there are no descriptions at all, though. I commend you for finding the balance between all these elements. It really looks like Sahara has a lot of enemies in the kingdom, am I right? By the way, I'm on the lookout in case I continue reading.

Grammar: I haven't found glaring mistakes so far, so good job!

Overall rate: 9/10

Would I recommend reading this story?: Do you like fantasy and magical kingdoms? Do you find Sahara a well-rounded character? Well, I think you'll love this story, then.