By snowflakecake_

Title: Simple and perhaps a little generic, but perfectly fitting the story's theme.

Blurb: The blurb is simple and goes straight to the point. Perhaps you could add a little more background, but it's your choice.

Cover: Simple and effective, fitting the theme.

Plot: I read the first chapter only, but with the hope to read more. This is my first time reading a student×teacher story, so I hope this won't affect the judgement too much. The two characters are living a complicated relationship, they don't know whether what they feel for each other is actually love, and I like that they try to defy the society that's shunning them. It's a realistic outset, dramatic but also hopeful. The chapter itself is a little rushed, though, try delving into detail more deeply.

Grammar: I noticed several mishaps with punctuation, but fortunately they didn't prevent me from reading the story at a reasonable pace.

Overall rate: 7/10

Would I recommend reading this story? If you're into student×teacher romance, you may like this story.