The Colour of Your Voice

by DanielNgo5

Title: A unique title that requires careful reading to be understood.

Cover: It's simple but also captures the essence of the storyline. A pointer: the title could be a little better readable.

Blurb: It's on point. You introduce the main characters and the conflict. Still, it lacks details.

Plot: I read the entire story and was immediately caught in the plotline. The two characters are strong and well-developed, the backstory is solid and structured through a smart use of flashbacks, transitions are smooth, which is good for the flow. The pace is on point, not too slow or not too fast.

Grammar: I read some comments pointing out some sentences that could be reworded better and I also found some typos. Nothing serious, though.

Overall rate: 8/10

Would I recommend reading this story?: Personally, I would. It involves complicated relationships and inner voice, which makes it interesting and enthralling.

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