By RexEynon

Title: I guess this is part of a series, right? It's pretty catchy, I have to admit.

Blurb: Most Wattpaders would be wary of blurbs ending with a question, but I like it. It's mysterious and leaves open doors for the readers. I also like that you're already trying to set a mysterious, dark tone.

Cover: It's nice and fits the theme, but I think it's kind of blurred. I mean, I struggled to read the text properly. Maybe you could try to fix the quality.

Plot: I noticed that your writing style is elaborate but effective. I also appreciate the conflict between Azarias and his parents, especially his father. The way you're developing the protagonist is incredible. Speaking of pace, at first the story starts slow but then picks up with a climax, which I appreciate.

Grammar: Your grammar is generally very good and I appreciate your wide vocabulary. Only a couple of missing punctuation marks, and a non-capitalized proper noun are your mistakes. Nothing that cannot be fixed, though.

Overall rate: 8/10

Would I recommend reading this story? If you like coming-of-age adventure stories with a fantasy element, this is a story you might want to check out.