By WriteDestiny

Title: Simple and intriguing. It definitely pulls readers in.

Blurb: It goes straight to the point without info-dumping.

Cover: Who made you this cover? It's beautiful and definitely fits the theme.

Plot: Okay, I already love Blix, her background and how you developed her. The story may start out slow, but I think this is supposed to be like that. I also like your other characters as of now - Ariadne and Bryony seem really good girls. Your descriptive style and elaborate sentence construction makes the story intriguing and pleasant to read. (As you requested, I read Chapter 1 only, but I'd really like to read more)

Grammar: I found no mistakes or run-on sentences. Great job!

Overall rate: 10/10

Would I recommend reading this story? Definitely. The descriptions will leave you in awe.