By Lizzythecutie

Title: It's a really simple title. Perhaps a little cliché, but if you intended it that way, I perfectly understand.

Blurb: Honestly, that's not even a blurb. You may want to expand on it, otherwise readers might overlook your story. Try starting from the main character, her goals and the supposed conflict in the story.

Cover: Simple and fitting the story's theme. You chose well.

Plot: I read the first two chapters, with the hope to read more later on. I like that you tried to include some diversity and how you developed the growing friendship between Clementine and Hannah. The two characters themselves are relatable enough and kind of realistic. One thing, though: the pace is a little slow for my liking.

Grammar: My biggest issue is with run-on and overlong sentences, which almost confused me. Some may even need rewording, though I didn't point them out. If you fix those, the flow will be more natural and the story will benefit from those changes.

Overall rate: 6.5/10

Would I recommend reading this story? With some polishing and editing to rework the run-on sentences, this could be a promising story. Perfect for whoever likes light-hearted romance stories.