By StarbucksMocha

Title: How many books are going to be in this saga? I'm curious. By the way, the title itself is really enticing. Simple but effective.

Blurb: The blurb is on point. It already gives readers an insight of what's going to happen without spoiling anything or sounding like pointless info dump.

Cover: I like it and I think it perfectly suits the theme, but I believe that your font choice could be improved. I don't like the ones you used for the title and author name as I find them inappropriate for the genre, but I love the one for the subtitle.

Plot: I read from the prologue to Chapter 6, with the hope to read more in the future. You have really clear ideas about the storyline, and your characters are clearly defined, especially Jai-Jai and Mara, the strongest and best-built ones. I believe, however, that the prologue is a tad too long; perhaps you have your reasons to keep it long, though.

Grammar: Save for the occasional spelling mistakes and misused punctuation marks, I found your grammar on point. I also appreciate that you're constantly getting your work proofread and edited.

Overall rate: 8.5/10

Would I recommend reading this story? I'd definitely recommend that you read this book, especially if you love a perfect mixture of fantasy and action with a strong presence of vampires.