By Iori_kei

Title: Simple and appropriate. I like that we have a clue of its meaning in the prologue.

Blurb: You don't reveal too much, but I feel you revealed too little. What's the main conflict? If I were you, I'd expand it a little bit and add more details.

Cover: It definitely matches the theme, so good job.

Plot: So far, I've read all the available chapters so far, so keep it up! I'd like to read more in the future. You have complex characters in a dull setting, which might brighten or darken further every time the storyline progresses. Apart from the main character, Adrian, two likeable characters are Logan and Kelly, even though the latter is at first kind of overbearing. On the other hand, Adrian's mother represents a sick relationship between a frustrated, uncaring woman and her unwanted son.

Grammar: I noticed only one mistake, but apart from that your grammar is on point. Watch the colloquial slang expressions, though, sometimes you spelled some words as if you were in spoken language.

Overall rate: 9/10

Would I recommend reading this book?: Definitely! Especially if you like reading LGBT+ romance.