Cookiestar16

Okay, Blitz is pretty cool, weakness and strengths are even! Thank god! But clumsyness isn't really a weakness, so that could use a little work. All around this oc is pretty good but ORANGE AND BLUE MAGIC?? I just feel that SCREAMS Sans and Papyrus. It's just overused is all. And the backstory is a little vague. Did Alphys just kidnap this child and experiment on her? Did Blitz allow Alphys to experiment on her? Going into further detail will clear up any random and crazy questions.

Marysue rating...

4/10

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