▶General Information◀
Name: Jordan Linkin
Meaning: From the name of the river which flows between the countries of Jordan and Israel. The river's name in Hebrew is יַרְדֵן (Yarden), and it is derived from יָרַד (yarad) meaning "descend" or "flow down".
Nickname(s): --
Alias: --
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Species: Titan Shifter
Birthday: January 1st
Birthplace: Shiganshina District of Wall Maria
Current Residence: Trost District of Wall Rose
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Relationship Status: Single
Personality: Jordan is a playful girl whenever she isn't busy being captain [which is rarely]. During her time of playing captain, she is strict. It isn't to be mean, but its to make sure she doesn't lose too many people because they don't follow procedures. She can be quite the romantic when she wants to be, but that's also very rarely.

I like how you added the meaning of the name. But there is one thing her nationality. She can't be Japanese because Mikasa is the last Japanese one left that would give her to be a Mary Sue right away.

▶Appearance◀
Height: 4'10"
Weight: 113.4 Lbs.
Hair Style: Her hair is long, almost to her waist, so she usually keeps it pulled back into a ponytail but her bangs hang loosely.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Tone: Peach
Body Shape/Build: She has somewhat of an hourglass shape, but her breasts aren't large so it takes away from the hourglass shape.
Birth Marks: --
Scar(s): Other then the usual scars of fighting titans, getting thrown, falling through tree's and street fights, none.
Other: --

I like the fact that you didn't give her humongous breast like some people would give their characters. The hair I would change a little bit. Just by not making it so long. I know she can put it in a ponytail but that might not be short enough. Mikasa cut her hair to be shorter so it doesn't get into the maneuver gear. The hair I would only change the length.

▶Health◀
Memory: She has a surprisingly well memory.
Sight: Jordan has 20/20 vision.
Mental: No problems that concern her. She will get depressed occasionally, but for good reasons.
Physical: She takes very good care of her body, except having to self inflict pain to shift into a titan.
Sleep Patterns: Jordan doesn't have sleep patterns. She falls asleep whenever she can and wakes up whenever she gets woken up or the sun shines in her eyes.
Allergies/Other: She is allergic to daisies and will have a sneezing fit if she comes in contact with one.

It is nice that you added this in here so people would know how she acts. And the daisy thing I like because some people would be like they have nothing wrong with them or there is something extremely wrong with them that they have the most outrageous backstory life.

▶Abilities/Statistics◀
3D Maneuvering Gear: 9½/10 [Since she is a captain, she is almost perfect with the gear. Sometimes she will have a slip up or lose her balance.]
Intelligence: 8/10 [Jordan's pretty sharp. She knows how to handle situations in a calm and orderly fashion, even if she is freaking out about it on the inside.]
Martial Arts: 8/10 [She has good skills with martial arts. They're not perfect, they're not bad. She can take down somebody larger then her though, unless they're a lot bigger then her.]
Battle Skill: 9/10 [Her battle skills are pretty sharp. She can handle titans in a quick and mostly graceful way, without attracting the attention of other titans.]
Agility: 7/10 [She can be quick and graceful without a problem. However, her balance can really throw her off.]
Strategy: 8/10 [Most of the time, she thinks a plan through and can execute it well. If she is rushed and just throws something together, her strategy is all messed up.]
Teamwork: 6/10 [She works well with teammates but she works even better whenever she is alone and doesn't have any distractions.]
Passion: 9/10 [There is a reason she joined. And she is passionate about what she does.]
Affiliation: Survey Corps
Grad. Rank: Captain
Status: Alive

The highs and the lows of it I would make about one more low like the one 6 just to give it equally. So the perfection of the Mary Sue doesn't creep in and devour your character because almost all the states are high.

▶Titan Shifter◀
Title: Nothing, other then Captain Jordan
Appearance: In titan form, she still has her jet black hair and blue eyes. She is slightly busty, and has some slight armor [not enough to protect against another captain].
What class Titan: 15m
Transformation caused by....: Self inflicted pain [mainly on the upper left arm]
Did you have previous knowledge of being able to change?: She knew from back whenever she was in training.
If yes, how did you find out?: During training, she got really stressed out and cut her upper left arm in an act to try and get rid of stress. However, she turned into a 15 meter titan and kind of freaked out, knocking a few houses down.
How well can you control it?: She can control it quite well. A lot better then how she use to be able to.

The titan shifter thing is another Mary Sue trait in AoT but I see how you put it in there. Her titan form absolutely needs a titan name though. All the other titans have them and so does she. One question, how she become a titan? We all know about Eren and sorta about Annie just add that in there and that will be fine.

▶Relationships◀
Parent(s): She never knew them
Sibling(s): Not that she knows of
Other Relative(s): Not that she knows of
Love Interest: Depends
How Close To Parent(s): --
How Close to Sibling(s): --

Kinda a sad Mary Sue backstory trait again. Try to give her like at least one mom that died or sibling. Just so she doesn't have a to much of a sad background like a few Mary Sue or regular Ocs I look at.

▶Additional◀
Quote(s): "If I could change, I would.", "Can I eat him/her now?", "Don't back talk me. I will smack you all the way to (farthest wall) and back."
Language(s) spoken: English, German, Italian, Japanese and Portuguese
Life-Long Dream: She's living it. She is finally captain.
Fear(s): Losing close friends, being abandoned, hurting somebody she cares for in titan form, enclosed spaces
Turn On's: Dirty talk, rubbing, grinding
Turn Off's: B.O./bad breath, Trying too hard, being too pushy
Anything Else: ▪She is very loyal to you once she trusts you.
▪She will not leave a member of her squad behind, even if it kills her.
▪Almost every knows she can titan shift, but very few people have seen her titan form.

Like it but the languages. German and English I see how she can speak them. AoT was placed on Germany and English some people there speak it. Japanese remember there is only one Japanese left, Mikasa. If you can explain why and how she can speak Japanese. Portugal idk you can keep that I guess. Italian if her nationality is Italian and she can learnt it I'm fine.

▶History/Life◀
Jordan was abandoned at the young age of five. She wasn't old enough to remember her parents, but she was old enough to know one thing. Kill or be killed. Even though she never killed a person, she kept that in her head. She fended for herself and often times had to steal food. Once she turned 13, she noticed that the regiments were accepting trainee's. She knew they provided food and a place to sleep. It seemed reasonable for her at the time and she joined as a trainee. She had no idea what she was getting into. Training was rough but she quickly rose through the ranks and by the time regiments were to be chosen, she knew she wanted to join the Survey Corps. She joined [despite what people thought of her] and eventually became a captain.

Again the sad backstory, change just a tad and that's cool. One thing that I need to know, Nationality? So far it's good let me rate this.

85/100

You get a B+.

You are almost slightly a Mary Sue but your character can almost can be seen in the show. The titan shifter thing takes off 10. Japanese language takes off 5. The hair takes off 10.

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