Moonfire
Female
Deputy
Thunderclan (rogue+Skyclan blood)
Silver shecat with a firey tint. Green eyes
Kind, brave, loyal, overconfident to trusting of others
Sky (mum rogue) Starpelt (sis) Sunstripe (BRO) Raincloud (Bro)
Father abandoned her and mum couldn't look after them so gave her to Thunderclan. She helps save the clan from Darkheart.

My Thoughts: Well, I like this character, Moonfire seems to be developed well, her father abandoning them and her mother not being able to care for her and her brothers does make sense, though how she would have SkyClan blood I'm not sure of. And I know Darkheart isn't the character here, but that's a very cliche name for an evil character. In fact, I'm using it as well. But we're only human, we all make mistakes. :3

Mary Sue?: Maybe a tiny, little bit.