Name: Amberpaw
Age: 8 moons
Gender: Female
Clan: Shadowclan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Shiny Amber eyes. Dark grey fur with darker grey strips. 3 claw marks across her right eye. Short furry tail.
Personality: Flirty, brave, fast, puts self before others, hates rouge cats, loves eating Ravens, go's out at night to hunt.
Family: Moonclaw (mom) Grassear (dad)
Treepaw (sister) Skypaw (sister) Tailpaw (brother)
History: Amber was born with her eyes open, and it's how she got her name. Even as a kit her mother would take her out to let her explore and play, and would teach her how to hunt and fight. At night Amber would love to go out and hunt for the clan and explore more but she would always get back to her den before morning. After six moons she became an apprentice and started night hunting with an older apprentice named Adderpaw. One night while hunting alone by the thunderpath she came across a thunderclan apprentice. She tried to talk to the cat but it ran away in fear. After a short chase she caught up with him and asked him why he was so afraid. He explained to her that Shadowclan had and extremely dark history and she vowed she would become leader and show all the clans how great Shadowclan really was. A short time after the two apprentices became great friends and often hang out together by the thunderpath. She got the scars on her face after protecting Rainpaw (the thunderclan apprentice) from a badger.

My Thoughts: Hm. I like this character. The perfect balance of average and special. Just one things bothers me, though. Kittens being born with their eyes open...I'm pretty sure that scientificly impossible. Maybe you could change it to her eyes just opened in a couple of days. Other than, I think this is a good OC.

Mary Sue?: If at all, only a bit.