Biatriss
(Language warning. I have now realized I've grown a bit too fond of cursing-)
Biatriss: ...
Zodiac: ...
Biatriss:
Zodiac:
Zodiac: Okay, please say something. I can't deal with more than 30 seconds of silence when an older, more mature looking dragon is in front of me.
Taro: Hi *stares at clipboard* Biatriss! Can I call you Triss? Triss sounds so cool. Zodi, Zodi *pokes Zodiac* Do you think mom would let me change my name to that??
Zodiac: No, her majesty would have a panic attack. We don't want her to lose even more scales because of stress she gets dealing with you.
Biatriss: Er.. sorry to interrupt, kids, but do you mind telling me where I am?
Taro: With the most awesome people ever!
Zodiac: Doubtful.
Taro: Aw.. don't say that about yourself.
Biatriss: *laughs hesitantly*
Zodiac: ...
Biatriss: Wait, no, I thought that was a joke. I'm sorry-- really.
Taro: Don't worry. Zodiac was just thinking of a comeback but he's a bit too slow. Great with math, terrible with insults.
Biatriss: No but his face is scrunching up like I killed his mom or something.
Zodiac: Eh, I'd be fine with that.
Biatriss: *stares*
Zodiac: F*ck.. I said that out loud, didn't I?
Taro: It's okay, Zodiac. Who actually has normal, healthy parents anyway? Certainly not any of the writer's ocs!
Biatriss: Yeah! Parents are overrated anyways. Running away was the best decision I ever made.
Taro: Woaahh~ you ran away from home?!
Zodiac: Woah, you survived?
Biatriss: Mhm! I grew up in the Volcano in the Night Kingdom. Let's just say, I started to have some realizations regarding my gender. I knew the NightWings weren't going to be accepting of this change so... I just left.
Taro: *pats Biatriss sympathetically* Hey, we should go back to the Night Kingdom and dunk honey on them all.
Zodiac: But... the Night Kingdom perishe--
Taro: Shh. If we don't realize, it never happened.
Biatriss: Um.. I don't think it works that way.
Taro: Boo, you two are no fun!
Fenn: *bursts in and points at Taro* YOU'RE JUST LIKE ME (you're just like me)
Taro: *points back* I'M JUST LIKE YOU (I'm just like you)
Zodiac: They share a braincell. Hey, Biatriss. Do you wanna go to the library together and ditch these fools?
Biatriss: *nods* I was just about to suggest that.
Taro & Fenn: WHO SHARES A BRAINCELL NOW??
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6/10
Biatriss's backstory was detailed enough but for this case, I do need it to be a bit more specific. (Eg. why Biatriss ran away. Did he know his family/tribe wouldn't be supportive?)
Harshly speaking, his personality needs a LOT more work. It's not that the personality is bad. Just that it's too generic. You'd need more traits if Triss is supposed to be a protagonist. If Biatriss is a side character in a book, then that's completely fine.
It's just a little hard to work with him in this interview because of the little details.
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