Apollo
Apollo: *Frowns* ...can I just fall asleep again. I'm not paid enough for this.
Adonis: We're being paid minimum wage to deal with annoying dragons all day. Don't complain.
Apollo: Oh... um, sorry...
Fenn: Don't be! Pyro would be stuck at home all day being all grouchy, and having no life, had you not been here.
Pyro: (glares, and then mumbles) For the record, I'm feeling equally grouchy right now.
Fenn: At least you have a life, right now.
Pyro: PLAYING VIDEO GAMES ALL DAY IN MY ROOM COUNTS AS HAVING A LIFE.
Fenn: *sing-songs* whatever helps you sleep at night~
Pyro: (swiftly ties Fenn up in silk, while Apollo nervously watches beside them.)
Adonis: One day, god, just one day. Let me get away from them.
Apollo: *sighs sympathetically* I get how you got all those wrinkles now.
Adonis: . . . OI, SQUARE UP BITCH. I'M ONLY EIGHT YEARS OLD!
Apollo: (blinks innocently) woahh, really? I'm six, but you look twice my age!
Fenn: Someone my age! (bounces around energetically) Everyone around me are all old, and grumpy--
Pyro: I know this is a dig at me. I'm literally one year older.
Fenn: *Pointedly ignores* I'm so glad you're here!
Apollo: Uh, hi...orange RainWing.
Fenn: *beams* Call me Fenn. And you're . . . *glances down at her clipboard* Apollo? WOAHH, YOU PLAY THE GUITAR?!
Apollo: (nods hesitantly.)
Fenn: You have to play for us, c'mon!
Pyro: If it's bad, I'm robbing your house.
Apollo: WHAT?!
Adonis: (roughly nudges Pyro with her elbow)
Pyro: I'm going to . . . bob your house.
Apollo: Oh, Bob! He's a very nice guy.
Fenn: I know right! Sweetest man on the block.
Adonis: (Hands over a guitar that manifested out of nowhere to Apollo.) Here you go.
(Suddenly, the entire place turned into a concert hall.)
Adonis: *whisper-shouts* what the fuck? Where did we get the budget for this?
Pyro: Some kid's life insurance money.
Adonis: . . . can you stop confessing to crimes??
Apollo: Um, so, I've composed several pieces, but I'll just play this song named "Thunderstruck".
(Apollo starts strumming his guitar. Beats from who knows where plays in the background. Fenn starts chanting "Thunder", almost possessed-like. Apollo plays with newfound vigour, completely shocking his three audience members.)
Pyro: . . . I did not expect that.
Adonis: *covering her ears* This is why I like classical music better.
Fenn: *rolls her eyes* Lame grandma. (she runs to Apollo). THAT WAS AWESOME APOGO!!
Apollo: *deadpan* Apollo.
Fenn: Gotcha, Apoodle.
Apollo: *long sigh* Can I leave now?
Adonis: Sorry man. You still have to tell us your backstory and shit, y'know. I know you don't want to but we're going to use Pyro to invade your privacy, so--
Apollo: I was born to a single parent-- my dad. I lived with him for three years before a group of SkyWings killed my father. After the war, I moved the Rain Kingdom--
Fenn: *cries* what?! How have we never met, before.
Apollo: Oh, no, we definitely have. I just avoided you every time because you seemed way too energetic for me.
Fenn: *pouts* Rude.
Apollo: Continuing on; I met Lotus, my best friend, and um.. (his face turns a hint redder), let's just say I met a very special someone. Oh! I also have my own band now.
Fenn: IF I HAD KNOWN THAT THERE WAS A BAND IN THE RAINFOREST KINGDOM, I WOULD'VE STAYED!!
Apollo: *mumbles to himself* I would not want you to stay.
Adonis: Do you have any other hobbies other than music?
Apollo: *eyes light up* oh I d--
Pyro: (sick and tired of waiting for this to end) It's inventing machines and explosives. He can also read minds and has prophecy powers. Very original, NightWing (?).
Apollo: The fuck-- I couldn't choose my powers??
Pyro: *sighs* Do I look like I care?
Apollo: *smiles sweetly* I think I need to speak with your parents-- oh wait, I forgot, one is dying, and the other is barely there!
Pyro: *spins and glares at him* I guess this makes two of us without any parental guidance in our lives.
Fenn: *whispers to Adonis* I don't have any parents either. Why am I so normal?
Adonis: ...Are you shitting with me?
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6.5/10. So, I really do like Apollo's interests-- like the rock band idea, and shit. Plus the inventing thing, which is really cool. I'm pretty depressed that I didn't get to include that part more. But character-design-wise, I wouldn't say he's the best.
There are a few things wrong with his backstory (e.g. why was his father killed, why did they leave him/how did he escape, how did this three year old even survive etc, etc.) I also want to mention that his personality is really not thoroughly written.
There needs to be some negative traits. I do like the socially awkward part though, but I'm not sure if I played it out right. I kind of just mashed it up with my personal experiences, which is why I made him dislike Fenn so much. (As much as I love my baby, I would hate being her friend irl.)
Still, a pretty solid OC.
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