Readers Discretion Advised
What is stated below is one hundred percent my own honest opinion. At times my own criticism sounds harsh but none is to be taken to heart.

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Hello everyone, today's reviewed story is Hysteria → Ebisu and Shizune book by one of our very own admins, honeybadgerontoast.

So, let's get started!

Book cover: Usually you shouldn't judge a book by its cover; for within the pages could be more magnificent than it reveals. Over the years, we either had been told or experienced it for ourselves. When we make covers for our books; we are given the power to create anything we want. Though sometimes what looks good for us may not be the cause for others.

When I take a look at the book cover, four words come into mind.

Simplicity

at

its

finest.

Most of the time a simple layout for a book cover takes you a long way because it is appealing to the eyes. The picture resolution is also a plus with this book. Fabulous job.

Title: Seventy-five percent of the time your title is the cause of why your story gets its views from new readers. A title has to be catchy, creative and fits with your storyline but it also can't be too long.

Now, Honey decides to use Hysteria. Below for the people that don't know the definition, you can find it below. ↓

hys·te·ri·a
həˈstirēə,həˈsterēə/
noun

exaggerated or uncontrollable emotion or excitement, especially among a group of people.

In my opinion, the title matches well with the cover of the story. It gives me a bittersweet feeling that makes me want to know exactly what lies ahead in the book.

Summary: What's a summary? An overview of content that provides a reader with the overarching theme, but does not expand on specific details.

Now the following is what I screenshotted from their story because I'm too lazy to write it all out.

As you can see they gave one little quote before giving us a theme. Not all summaries have to look like this one but this is one of the ways you can do it.

Grammar: Goodness sake this is my pet peeve personally. It is understandable that no one is perfect but grammar is what makes me and a lot of readers determined if we should stay and read past a chapter or two.

So let's go into Hysteria and take a random paragraph out and examine it.

I had examined the whole paragraph and there are no grammar mistakes. Honey, is indeed awesome at what they do. So really, I don't expect any less for them.

Plot: Honey book is one-shots. Partially, the plot always changes with each chapter but all stories have a common theme; Shizune and Ebisu relationship. So if you are a lover of the couple, please drive in deep within the book.

Final Verdict: Honey, my god, this is great stuff. On a scale to 1 to 10, you my pal have achieved a 10.

Now, this isn't the only great story they have. Visit their profile and check out other pieces of their work.

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