Title : The Time Traveler's Christmas

Author : Lightning_Stryker

Summary : the story about a time traveler and his experience with coffee, love, and new beginnings.

Review : In which a time traveler falls in love with a woman so caring, so loving, and so very dying.

A simple coffee brought two people together and started off a love story that took off to long lengths and brought great joy and happiness to them.

He loved her so very much and she did him. She loves him so much she had to hide the fact that she was dying and once he found out. It was like he was dying with her. She was the love of his life and he couldn't stand seeing her like this. But after all this time, he still thought that she was the most beautiful woman she has ever met.

After her death, he went back to the place where they first met and started the story all over again, but this time, it was him handing over a cup of warm coffee in the cold weather.

Critique : I love how the writer expressed the narrator's feelings very well and made the story short and yet very detailed. It really touched my heart and brought a lot to think about.

I think this story describes the way people live life in the real world and gives out natural examples of how people suffer and go through things and the coming of letting go as well.

The grammar used was right on point and I think the story was of perfect length and the title is pretty catchy. I would suggest to get a better cover done, but other than that it's really great.

I recommend this to all my cancer supporters, this a great example of a short story awareness.