Lauren: why did she come out for

Neesha: just to let you know my boyfriend askes me to come out

Lauren: did he now i bet you would be stuck in that room of yours over there

Neesha: wow you changed since dad died i wonder how it feels everyone asking if your alright day and night i don't get that but you and abie gets that

Lauren: neesha why you starting for

Abie: please don't do this

Neesha: well maybe if i don't do this you would come and visit your sister but no you didcied to brush her away like everyone else dose wow your really are great sisters ain't you

Abie: we do care and we wanted to come and see you but ian told us you didn't want to see anyone so we just lefted that so we can do tonight and then be able to see you everyday if you let us

Lauern: abie she is no better then anyone else just lave her  out of everything we do from now on

Neesha: wow Lauran grow up

Lauran: why don't you

Neesha: calasey

Pater:  right lets get you home now then

Neesha: i not going home pater definitely not till Lauren gets out of  my way

Pater:  she won't get out of your way unless you and her become better sister's

Neesha: definitely not she doesn't even act like she loves me like she used to do

Lucy: she dose neesha belive me she dose

Neesha:  no she don't she can't even look at right now do you wnat to know something Lauren

( this is what lauren looks like at the moment in the story)

Lauren: what is it

Neesha: you where my favourite sister when we where young and before dad died but iam guessing that has gone now

Lauren: i can still be the same lauren as i used to be neesha you know that i can

Neesha: you no can't be the old lauren before dad died because that changed you it changes people lauren that parson is you it changed u not me not abie you

( this is what lucy looks like in the story at the moment)

Lucy: lets just go home and sober up and talk tomorrow yh

Neesha: okay fine lets do what lucy say everyone come on lets go home

( what pater looks like in the story)

(has top on though)

Lucy: pater is sock that you just said that

( me and lucy walk behind lauren and abie and pater so i can talk to her)

Neesha: lucy come here

Lucy: what is it neesha

Neesha: why didn't you tell me you had a boyfriend luc

Lucy: because i didn't want you to okay because your every over proceitve of me okay

Neesha: the rassson why iam very protective of you is that iam your best friend Lucy i care about you

Lucy: are sure you care about me why didn't you come when i needed you most neesha

Neesha: becouse your brother and your dad told me to lave you alone that's why

Lucy: oh so you listened to pater did you like you always do

Neesha: i don't always listen to pater

Lucy: you know what iam just gonna go walk with the rest hope they make sense

Neesha: wow luc you do that

Lucy: you know Lauren is right

Neesha: yeap she is now bye

( pater comes over and ask if i wanna go to there's)

Pater: are you coming back home

Neesha: best not just lost my best friend

Pater: she'll get over it by the morning
Come home neesha

Neesha: no i don't want to come home pater i have told you that

Pater: so where you going to go then

Neesha: i'll go to jack's for the night then i come home tomorrow night