So here is a sneek peek of the first chapter. FYI this is the first draft so this will be different in the final version. Also tell me in the comments on yoour thoughts. And BE HONEST!!!!

CrimsonSector87 What are your thoughts.

"H-hey Sis, when can we head home?" A little boy around 6 asked while looking up at a girl with brown and pink hair that was carrying him. The boy was scared since she just ran into his room, woke him up and then swiftly ran out a apartment. The girl just stayed quiet and continued running and carrying the boy. She ran into a abandoned shop and pants lightly. She set him down on the ground and collapsed to the ground. A pool of blood was coming out from her stomach under her raggity shirt. The boy's eyes widened and quickly crawled up to her. "N-neo, Please be alright!" He said loudly as Neo covered his mouth. She then slipped a knife into his and then signs to him: 'Mint... go... leave me... Head to the orphinage... don't trust the police... and hide... from... dad.' Neo signs weakly before she was to weak and her hands fell to the ground.