Cover Judge: Could be arranged better. Title enlarged, shifted more to the center. Your author name is tiny. And those awards are unreadable. Just saying.

I suggest a cover remake.

Blurb Judge:

This is incomplete, or a mistake. When you start a sentence with a when, then you need to complete it with something that follows the first part.

You could rewrite that as:

"But how could she, when her past is haunting her, following her through every road and corner?"

"But how could she? Her past is haunting her, following her through every road and corner."

"But how could she? When her past is haunting her, following her through every road and corner, Roslyn will have to untangle the web of lies surrounding her mysteriuos twin's sucide with the aid of a stranger."

Also: the adjective "mysterious" is referred to the twin or the suicide? Is the twin mysterious or was the suicide mysterious?

Heads-up: The full stop in the title looks ugly. You usually want to avoid punctuation.

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This Q&A before the actual story is inconvenient. It has spoilers, and I'd rather read them after the story. I'd suggest simply moving it to the last slot- and for example, that soundtrack part could be placed at the beginning.

I'm unsure whether to say something about the full stops in every chapter title. Again, you rarely use punctutation in titles. If it's something you did on purpose, then ignore me.

I know a lot of professional authors like to capitalize the first couple words of each chapter, but I honestly don't see the point. Or at least make it consistent. You know these things that I use continuously? -------

Count them. There are exactly 7 dashes. Like a sort of singature by me, the Seventh Writer.

NOT COMPLAINING, just wanted to point it out.

Nice start, the right descriptions at the right moments, not too much exposition.

Why, may I ask? That seems like a terrible compromise. I get you want to answer each question on your Q&A page neatly and all, but this is what Wattpad is for. Leaving inline comments so you know a reader liked this certain passage or didn't like it. You say you're going to ignore or even delete them! Why?

Swear warning. Drunk warning.

Chapters are the right length, everything flows very smoothly.

Atlas Crystalic. Could you get more over the top than that?

It's not finished, is it?

Summary: Structure and flow is flawless; story and plot itself has holes in them but that you can fix in time. Not exactly my cup of tea in terms of genre and themes, but this is the right direction.