Blurb Judge: Okay, I guess, but not exceptionally captivating but still good. I don't know what the whole story is about so I can't suggest you anything so far.  

Cover Judge: It's nice, but it doesn't really fit the story, which is like Hunger Games type. Still, looks fine. If you plan to change it, I could give you some tips? :)

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The abilities are cool, I hope they'll have a bigger role in the future and not just being a cool extra feature (you know what Chekhov  said, "If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there")

I haven't understood what the prologue serves; so Blaze is a princess?- was a princess- but we start with her in a Hunger Games situation, as slaves, with guards?

Hey, now that I think of it, it is very similar to Hunger Games. I'm not going to call clichè, as it can take a different path.

Chapter 1 seems more fit for the prologue, I think, because it's a flashback thing. It's also very long, I almost got bored in the first half, until her father came in.

So far, I can't see much of a plot- in the blurb it says they're just trying to survive a year while the terrorism goes on.

Summary: Has potential, when more action comes up. I'd like to see more fantasy of the "fantasy" genre.