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Oh, you're the one whom I reviewed "Cut" for! You renamed it "Overwritten" huh? Not bad.
Cover Judge: Yeah, this is one of those few covers that I take a look at and think "Yup. There is basically nothing wrong in this I can point out."
Maybe the middle body with all the rumpled papers and title could be bigger, compared to the cover size. There's a lot of empty color above and under.
Blurb Judge:
Half hour, maybe.
Short and simple. This would interest me more if I knew you personally or something, but even when I don't it works.
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A good what?
If you mean it as in to be disturbed or disconcerted, the correct spelling is "fazed" otherwise "phase" means a distinct period or stage in a process of change or forming part of something's development (thanks Google)
Summary: Okay, this is not fiction or an actual story story. It's more like a collection of thoughts and stuff. And I can't exactly review this, because that would mean to review you- the person behind the messages. And...I don't do that. It doesn't make much sense.
I corrected some grammar but it's not necessary, especially if you want to conserve the original writing ("raw" writing, how I like to call it.)
So...this is not a review. And this is the end of the not review :P
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