| Tropical Dystopia

Cover Judge: No. Amateurish. A vague girl by the sea. Colors are dull. Your author name is an ugly red at the bottom.

I suggest a cover remake.

Blurb Judge:

WHAT are the ODDS?

Grammar mistakes look terrible in the summary:

No apostrophe.

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Funny story, right this morning my brother's alarm clock woke me up at like 3 in the morning with some super loud rock music. It was terrible.

Nice crappy sea you've got here.

Whew. Thought she was propping her gun instead.

Not everyone in high school is a supermodel! Your descriptions are all the same. You're saying how beautiful hair their hair is and long legs and such complimenting eyes they have but it's all forgettable. Better illustrate something that makes them stand out.

Birds don't fly at the altitude of planes. So she technically couldn't have seen "gorgeous exotic birds flying past the plane". Unless she was hallucinating. That's always an option after an airplane ride. Jetlag and I are very close friends.

So nothing is happening and I don't care about teenage drama or someone's ex-boyfriends or whatever. It's getting boring. And I'm not impressed with the writing style or content.

Summary: Sounds plastic and also boring.

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