Cover Judge: Acceptable...title could be a bit thicker and visible. Black on dark gray doesn't stand out much. That blur on the lady's face is on purpose?

Blurb Judge: One word: nice.

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Do you know how many stories there are titled "The Rejected Ones"??

Here's a tip: before definitively naming your story, search it on the Wattpad search bar. If 20+ stories come up all named the same, it's a very popular and thus very unoriginal title. You don't want your story to be lost in that sea.

The "Stuff to set the Mood for My Story" chapter is sooo long!

You seem to have a problem with commas. I've left inline comments to correct you so at least do me the courtesy and fix the errors.

Also, I see readers commenting tips and things. It's good advice to listen to what they're complaining about, because they're the readers and they're reading your story from a different point of view.

Content-wise...well, it all seems a little flat. Numerous questions arise with this type of theme (mysterious dude trains professional assassin kids) and it's almost lacking something. Not sure what to offer, because I'm sure it's been done already.

Characters also seem stereotypical: the MC, the young sweet one, the self-harming one, the tomboy, etc.

Summary: I was intrigued at the beginning but it trailed off by the next chapters.