NOTE: Yeah, so this isn't dead. I apologize for the hiatus. Currently focusing on my new original novel Kill Contract

SELF PROMOTIONAL LINK IS HERE: https://www.wattpad.com/story/120560179-kill-contract

At this point you've requested here so much time ago that you probably forgot about it and it'll seem like a surprise review when I actually arrive to your book.

Thanks to:

Definitely_not

for basically voting on every single chapter xD

Now, onto the review->

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Cover Judge: That's pretty confusing. Is it a heart? An ornate decoration split into two? I think you could find a great cover that can mix together the cryptic, mysterious and "mosaic" part of the book.

Blurb Judge:

Actually pretty professional sounding. Interesting historical spin. I've always liked greek/roman settings.

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Brilliant cinematic introduction. Good inclusion of all the senses. Those dark images of hands at every chapter aren't necessary.

To-the-point descriptions, so far so good. Dialogues seem too formal for my liking, but hey, maybe they spoke like that in ancient Venice.

Chapters start to get a little long and my interest's wavering. I stopped after 7 parts unfortunately.

Summary: Writing is good, plot moves a little slowly for what I read. And I seriously think you deserve a better cover.