Cover Judge: Not spectacular for sure...did you order at a cover shop? Text and resolution isn't top notch; there's also black lines running on the right and bottom. But I like the silhouettes posing in front of a brick wall; it fits the genre.

How is Es Ef your pen name?

Blurb Judge: It sounds very cliché...but at the same time, not that bad either. I am partially interested to see what they are capable of.

Side note: Super SIX? Why not Super Seven?

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Totally did not expect that texting-type of writing. Not sure how it's going to work out...but also less heavy to read (yay)

Just a suggestion, I think the story would appeal more if instead of "Adventure 1", "Adventure 2" you write the actual case as title. First chapter could be "1: the Mystery of the Missing Necklace"

And adventure 3 and 4 are the same, so you could put "The Mystery of the Missing Statues: part 1" and "The Mystery of the Missing Statues: part 2"

Question: Why do you put upside down question marks?  

10 million dollars for a grandma necklace? Sounds a bit blown off the top, considering the world's most expensive necklace is 55 Mil. Also, a friend of Abigail owns a sapphire ring? What is this, Millionaire City?

Whose perspective is the story in? Because it says "we were sitting in the hotel" but when the dialogue comes in you never see "me" saying something. And then Blaze says something "to us" but who is the "me" that makes them "us"?

This sounds complicated, but I'm just wondering what kind of POV it's set in.

There are a couple strange wordings and verb tenses (i.e. you cannot close a phone)

I could list them all but I commented on the passages directly because it's simpler. I only corrected the first chapter, so be sure to review the rest based on the mistakes you made in the first.

Thing to point out: So, the Super Six basically live together? In a hotel? All same room? Because when Beatrice said "wakie wakie"  everyone replied together, implying they heard her.

Mystery-wise: The cases are not of Sherlock magnitude, obviously. And I have to question the ways of the Six. Blaze goes to a boy's house out of a hunch and demands "where is that ring" and the boy already admits that he has it but won't give it.

And suddenly Beatrice pulls a string and a cage materializes out of nowhere and traps the boy?

As for the third case, there's no mystery to solve because Frankie already knows it was his father who stole the statues. So, it's more like a treasure hunt.

If this is a lot to take in, it's because mystery type stories are double hard to write.

It's like spy stories. First you have to think up an genius evil plan for the bad guys to put in action. And then you have to think for the good guys to thwart that very plan.

So work on it! You can improve.

Summary: Written quite amateurishly