Cover Judge: If it weren't for the genre "werewolf" Id' have guessed Romance or Drama. Meh. The title is literally fading away, and the font is super thin.

Blurb Judge: Like I said already once: #886 isn't the best ranking. I would include book rankings if it's actually good, like <100, but it's your choice to put it or not.

Susse? Doesn't that mean sweet in German or something else?

All those sentences ending in three dots don't look good.

Jocelyn Jones? HA! This is at the rankings of Kimberly Marie Hearts.

That's a heck of a lot of hyphens.

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The first chapter is in present, and I found some weird syntax already. Verb tenses often don't agree. And why are there commas instead of full stops?!

Oh hey, it does mean sweet in German. Yay. So I am learning something in school.

Derange? That's an even worse name than Jocelyn Jones! Who would name their (human or werewolf, nonetheless) child "Derange"??

This is a very very long first chapter.

Let's examine a paragraph.

If there's only one, it's spelled "woman".

The tense is supposed to be present but that doesn't mean every single verb has to be present. This should be "They're dressed professionally"

And the sentence "They all went inside and one of the females went inside" is simply atrocious.

You already have 16 chapters, so I'd recommend pausing and going through each one of them to edit them. Or hire an editor. Because there are still lots of small mistakes here and there.

How are these werewolves? Their powers are so vague. There's like super speed and super senses and electrical gadget dismantling?...Plus is everyone a werewolf in the story? And Alphas are a regular thing?

I don't like werewolf genre. Or vampire. The fact that "werewolf" has become an actual genre is worrying. Same with "vampire" or "chicklit".  It's so overused, it's become a cliche.

Summary: Could use editing. And I personally do not find this theme original nor exciting.