Cover Judge: Since the opening is the couple sitting on a hill under a starry sky, that should be the ideal cover.

Blurb Judge: Um. Okay? Not sure what to make of it. I don't think it really makes sense.

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Good opening dialogue, flows very smoothly. Their pauses allow minor details and the wind blowing or things like that to take place, and it adds a solid sense of realism. I can feel something's wrong even when they act so natural.

I am not a fan of romance but I have to admit I liked the chapter. There was good timing, good metaphors, and that last phrase "William left the place with his feelings" was interesting.

Side note: Now I know the reason behind the cover. So...the problem is the current cover isn't very captivating, at least to me. It looks like some confessions/rants/unsent letters type of story. I feel the starry sky and hill would've been the better choice.

Summary: Not much to write about, but I guess that's good because I don't have much to complain about :)