Cover Judge: First reaction was like woah and I jumped back when I saw it. I thought it was a horror story xD Aside from that, I don't understand? The girl is supposed to be Carter?

I would change it, but that's all up to you. Also, the title: "Ask Carter". That gives me the impression of an internet-type mystery, probably because of the popular thriller #AskAmy, but we haven't gone much into the story yet.

Blurb Judge: Good enough. One minor thing: #990 ranking is not much of an achievement- it's actually a pretty low number. Wait for the ranking to rise if you want to include that in your blurb.

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First chapters flowed nicely. I like that opening, especially "a bomb blew up the school" kept me momentarily hooked in what type of bomb. You managed to fit in a long description of Carter without making me snore, good job on that.

Out of the stories I've reviewed so far, I like your writing best; it fits for a thriller type story.

Is it necessary to put songs on every chapter? I don't know, is that a thing on Wattpad? I guess some people like it...anyway, I'm not here to judge the songs xD

I appreciate the realism of the story- so far. There's no crazy kid who goes investigating and miraculously solves the mystery; there are four friends helping each other in this strange situation. This adds a more down-to-earth feeling, but it might also drag on too long and risk make the story boring.

With only 5 chapters, I honestly can't say much.

You mentioned you might switch POVs? Well, I tell you, that's a tricky thing to pull off, but when done right plays out nicely, especially for a thriller type story, where the characters might have different pieces of information. Plan carefully!

Summary: Like a mystery, let's see how it plays out.

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| | U P D A T E | |

I realize many of these stories are work-in-progress-es, so if you want me to re-review it (does that even exist?) in the future, I can comply- BUT I will review it only once more.

So, say I've already seen your 4 part story. You fill out the form again and it has 11 chapters but it's still WIP. I'll review what there is new, how the story has changed, etc, but you've reached the limit of reviews for that particular story.

Sure, if I actually like it (HAHAHAHA), I might drop by when it's finally finished, but yeah. Two reviews max for each WIP.

(how many times did I say review? like 6 times?)