| And Then There Was Aine

Yay, a short story that's actually short!

Cover Judge: Is this ugly right-hand-side letter cut-off on purpose? Coz now it reads "Hen, here was aine"

I can make out some note bars and...a sea with rocks.

Not the best that I've seen.

Blurb Judge: Straight-to-the point. I'm not like "wow this sounds so interesting" but I'm betting the angel's name is Aine.

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^^ Where do you get this? I see lots of Wattpad authors using it for ANs and stuff.

More characters aethetics. I guess when they're only like, 2, it works at illustrating the characters.

Swear warning.

First chapter in: alright. Almost dozed off at the flasback about his life.

The guy speaks Korean and thinks in Korean but the story is in English. This is because obviously we don't know Korean. Could cause some problems.

Oh, okay, that's the end. Hm. I didn't really pay attention to the description of the music. Maybe I should have. However, the last sentence really is great.

Summary: Not much to say, lacked a bit of je ne sais quai to make it an efficient, impactful short story.

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