I'm starting to feel like you guys aren't enjoying the story. I feel like I came on a little too strong with the sudden changes.

Obviously, I can't tell you why her opinion just all of a sudden changed. It will make sense, but the plot twist would end the book, and we're currently only at 4 chapters.

If this is the case, however, I can rewrite the last chapter if you'd like and make the changes a little slower.

Again, I promise it will all make sense. It also won't end happily.

Please comment your opinions on the story. I keep feeling like I rush the story and thats why most of my books end too quickly or the last couple of chapters seems random or unimportant.

The reason for this is I'm not like other writers in the sense that I make random chapters.

Even in famous books theres one or two chapters at least where they have a little adventure, sure, but it doesn't do anything for the plot and is just there to prolong the book.

As for me, on the other hand, every chapter I make is about the plot. Even if it doesn't seem like it at first, every chapter I make -- even if it seems random -- holds some importance to the main plot, whether a small hint that impacts one of the characters thinking in puzzles or the character getting closer and closer to their goal.

The bad side of this is because I spend all of the chapters advancing in the plot my books become much shorter then others because their so straight to the point.

I'm sorry I rambled a little, but the main point of this Authors Note is for you to comment what you think of the story. I don't see any reads on the previous chapter, and (Although that chapter was just for keeping up the Mariya-Carlos point of view and adding the hint that he isn't responsible for how she feels) it made me think you guys have abandoned it or aren't excited for it. All I want is for you guys to appreciate the book.

Anyway, it won't matter too much. If you guys do hate it then I'll continue writing chapters, I just won't publish them.