Quick update for the story: From now on, when you see people (Speak like this), that is their thoughts instead of doing: (Thoughts) and then have them think it in their heads. I've noticed a lot of writers doing this and thought that I should do it too. I am sorry for the late update again, but I do try to get my chapters ready. For me, it takes time to think on what I need to put down and analyze how this plays out to its most effectiveness.

Again, sorry for the late update, and I hope you have a wonderful day.