Hello there, I rewritten the whole plot to this story so it won't be as complex for me to write and more fun to read. It has sum..I mean a lot of the plot still their but all we done.

???:you know that you are not going to be able to do this right.
(Shoves out of the door)
???:HEY!!!
(Slam the door shut)
Me: hehe

Bye guys!!