I'm so sorry this took so long. I've been really busy, but that's still no excuse. This won't happen again, and thank you for your patience.

Conventional_weapons
I liked your story. It was a cute idea, and I felt happy for the characters when I finished. Some parts didn't seem to flow well, but overall, it was very good.
Grammar- 25/25
Plot- 23/25
Realistic characters- 23/25
Fits the criteria- 25/25
Overall score- 96 points

Pompadora

Nice story. I liked seeing the way you put in the mandatory phrases, and the similarities between Sammy and Harry.
It would have been nice to get a little more information, because I feel like I didn't get to know the characters as well as I would have liked, but overall it was very good.
Grammar- 24/25
Plot- 24/25
Fits the criteria- 25/25
Realistic characters- 20/25
Overall score- 93 points

Annabeth_Malfoy

I liked your story a lot. I was a bit confused in the beginning. I felt like I had been thrown straight into a scene I didn't really understand, but aside from that it was good.
You put in the lines you needed quite well, and it didn't feel too long or too short. Well done
Grammar- 24/25
Plot- 23/25
Realistic characters- 24/25
Fits the criteria- 25/25
Overall score- 96 points

Clato_maroon

Your fic was very well written. I felt very involved with the story. I felt like I really knew the characters.
Unfortunately, you messed up part of the assignment. Your assignment was to write about James Sirius Potter, not James Senior, but other than that, everything was good.
Plot- 24/25
Fits the criteria- 17/25
Realistic characters- 25/25
Grammar- 25/25
Overall score- 91 points

El1zas

I really liked your fanfic. In a short fanfic, you still managed to make me care about their relationship. You fit the criteria, so congrats. Overall, nice work
Grammar- 24/25
Plot- 24/25
Fits the criteria- 25/25
Realistic characters- 24/25
Overall- 97 points

Booksarebetter26
I Iiked the idea for your fic. It was sweet to see another boy in the marauder gang, but something was off. The story was hard to follow, and I didn't really feel like I had gotten 'into' it.
And as you know, you wrote about the wrong James Potter, but overall it was good, it just need a little tweaking.
Plot- 23/25
Grammar- 24/25
Realistic characters- 23/25
Fits the criteria- 17/25
Overall score- 87 points

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