THE ULTIMATE BAD CHARACTER DETECTOR
HOW THE THING HECKING WORKS:
You check off the boxes that apply to the character, and in the end it'll give you a score. Too high you need to change some things, too low and your tea is the blandest of teas. Just because your character applies to a box doesn't make them bad having too high of a score on the other hand does.
The more honest you are with your oc, the better it works! Tends to work best with non animal based creatures and humanoids.
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[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon/ghost
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie/some kind of mythical creature
[ ] They are a creature that does not fit into their respective world/from another world
[ ] They are physically very strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] They are a god/goddess/demigod
[ ] [if a female] they have large bra size/are extremely pretty
[ ] [if a male] they are very muscular/are extremely handsome
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] Lost prince/princess
[ ]They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ]Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's deaths
[ ] They are part angel/god/goddess/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They are a cyborg or have electronic implants
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They don't have parents/born from nothing or made in a lab
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They have a lot of scars or disfigurements
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have been divorced once or multiple times
[ ] They are/have been in an abusive relationship
[ ] Everyone likes/are neutral with them right away
[ ] Everyone has a crush on them/often immediately fall for them and or are attracted to them.
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psychopath/sociopath
[ ] They have killed many people
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name/name that does not fit their culture (Like an American character having a Japanese name for example)
[ ] They were born on an important/significant date, (Like New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.)
[ ] They are religious
[ ] They preach their religion to others/will hate/ridicule certain people who don't follow or believe in their religion
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country/planet/etc from where they currently live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They are 'the last of their kind'
[ ] They have a little cabin in the woods/live alone in the woods
[ ] They have insomnia
[ ] They are emotionless
[ ] They have a natural talent/skill
Overall points:
Point Reductions
Take one point off your OC's overall score per the following applicable statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight/underweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs or medication
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They are below average intelligence/are an idiot
[ ] Had loving caring/average parents
[ ] They enjoy bullying/harming others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They lack an ability that the rest of their species/race always have
[ ] They don't have a weapon and it's not because they don't have access to one
[ ] They are poor
Final Score is:
<5 -Anti-Sue
6-20 -Balanced Character
21-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary Stu
26< -Mary-Sue/Gary Stu
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